Reviews for Don't Forget Me
QUEENSPELLER67 chapter 2 . 11/24/2016
Oh, that was sweet of Cynthia to take a picture of the lovebirds. Ash had a very interesting dram. This was a very interesting chapter.

Not sure if I want to see May pregnant or not.
Burgernator chapter 1 . 11/22/2016
There's one major flaw with the story overall: If Ash remembers EVERYTHING and EVERYONE EXCEPT May, wouldn't he still however remember Max, and his adventures in Hoenn, thus immediately remembering May?
Advance shipper chapter 1 . 11/21/2016
I diffenitly want may to stay with ash for good stay and loyal to him and have drew stay out of mays life for good and never come back into ashs and mays life again ash and may are perfect together drew is not right for may he only cares about himself and being popular
Pokemon fan chapter 2 . 11/21/2016
I think one of the best ways ways for ash to get his memories of may back is to get him to remember his adventures experiences since they started their journey from hoenn to kanto along with the events that took place such as the time when ash and may first manaphy to the tree of the beginning and when the experinces they felt as they were trying to bring jirachi back to its home and if may were to have a child with ash I think it should be a girl and I think of one names for her and that name is sapphire because mays eyes color are like sapphire and mays original name in less is sapphire
ChloboShoka chapter 1 . 10/12/2016
I feel so bad for Ash. Also love how Delia is so involved in this chapter.
stevexclax chapter 1 . 9/27/2016
I will gladly follow this story. It should be good. I do want to point out that you did misspell "Forget" in the title. Please fix that. Could you also post the characters' ages next chapter please?

I am looking forward to how this story turns out. This story actually reminds me of two fanfics I've read: "Remember Me" by Torchix and "Man in the Mirror" by Advance4ever. I'm only reminded of "Man in the Mirror" because it also involves forgetting one person and remembering everything else.

I have read "Remember Me" many times, and I really enjoyed it. I do hope that you have your own path on how you want this story to progress. Will May be pregnant in this story?

Anyway, I am looking forward to the next chapter of this story. Keep up the good work.
Advance shipper chapter 1 . 9/27/2016
That's sad seeing ash getting injured like that and seeing may so upset about what happened and after when ash wakes up he remembers every one but may I can only imagine how hard that hurt may I know may will find a way to get ash to remember her again and everything thing they did together since the day they first met and I think one of the things that might trigger something in Ash's memories is the terracotta ribbon that they both share I hope it doesn't take too long for ash to get his memories of may back she needs the old ash back in her life so they can continue their happy life together great first chapter keep up the good work keep it going