OH MY GOSH A TEAM STARKID QUOTE I LITERALLY ALMOST CRIED I WAS SO EXCITED

I like to pretend that this chapter didn’t happen and that the story teller was Adrian. It’s a lovely story and very funny in some places!

Eww...puke kisses... really?

I have loved all of your stories that I've read so far. My only problem is in this story. It's nothing major and it doesn't change the story itself at all. However, in chapter 8 Adrian's parents were listed as Victor and Peter. Then in chapter 17 they introduced themselves as Paul and Jared.

OH MY FREAKING GOD! YOU CAN'T END IT LIKE THAT! IT WAS SUCH A GOOD STORY AND THEN YOU DO THAT! I CAN'T EVEN PROCESS IT! THE WHOLE THING WAS A LIE!? WWWWHHHHHYYYYYY!?

-cackles- I love the ending well done

...fuckin... wha... PLOT TWIST

What. I’m. Just. Huh? I think I understand but it’s one am and my brain isn’t working completely. So uhh what

omg! what in the name of all the unholyness just happened o.o like the entire story just got over written like none if it happened omg my mind is so blown right now either way great story

Nice twist at the end

And you were making him seem so nice, I’ve only seen story where he was bad and I was hoping this would be a game changer but I guess not.

Maybe Adrian Ashford is an Reincarnation of Adrian Balk

Well with that ending... I demand that you write a sequel with the true story of what happened ...

Love the ending.

I actually like your story i thought i wouldn't because of the ending but it made me laugh instead