oh yeah, that was hot! the only thing I did personally not like that much is Kakashi acting so overly concerned. She's not a raw egg and he needs to grow more into his role as a dom. The consent part is good because it clears up stereotypes but it's a little too much. Remember they're a couple in a loving relationship, living together and sharing their lives, of course they know each other well and won't do anything to harm the other seriously. The sub shouldn't think so much during a session, she should be able to completely relax and give her body and soul to the dom. I like your description of their aftercare, it's very important. All in all you did a great job feeding interest to bdsm beginners or curious vanillas. You managed to give a good impression how lovely and sweet bdsm could be. last but not least seriously only one orgasm with the hitachi? why? ;P and why did he restrain himself that much and didn't took her during their basement session? those two are so hot together. I hope you'll continue writing this. I'd love to read what will happen at the mission

this was sweet, i've never read a BDSM story like this. and thank you for the lovely read~