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It end there?
Please update, this is great

I really like this crossover, and can’t wait to see where Miles goes from here! Hopefully he remakes a hidden blade, but who knows. Honestly I’m really hoping he ends up going after the Thalmor with a newly remade Brotherhood. Hope to see you back with another chapter soon!

I like your analogy for death in this.

I like this. Having the Apple be something (part of him?) that is lost gives him a reason (quest) to go looking for it. Having him meander between sides of the war is more interesting than choosing one. Having him save the Horse-thief was more enjoyable than not.

Great story! I particularly liked how you wrote the various people’s perceptions of Desmond. I can’t wait to read more

Hah I can so see some people worshipping Des as some kind of Godsend with his apple xD
Or they'll think it's a daedra artifact and hunt him down for having made a pact with a prince. We can't miss the chance to make Desmond's life harder, do we?

Anyway, this is pretty interesting

Holy shit you updated! THAT'S FRIGGIN AMAZING!
I had given up on seeking this continue but kept it on my alert list and omg so glad I did.

LOL Lokir is friends with Desmond now? And took out a Stormcloak with a bronze vase. Classic.

Jeez, hope the Apple is safe. Like, hope a daemon Prince doesn't have it. That would be bad.

I like Hadvar, I'm glad he didn't die. :)

I await the update!

3 I love this! This is a fantastic chapter! It's really interesting seeting Desmond from another's point of view. I like this is playing out - Desmond taking Lokir Halvod :) I like how he saved Halvod :) His rationalization for it :)
Thank you for the wonderful update!

A new chapter! I'm so excited! :) Hopefully Desmond will find his Apple wherever he's fallen to. Did they skip the torture room and the chance at magic books?

Are you having Desmond join the imperial(s), because you made him kill the stormcloaks?

really, you just had to take the apple away from him didn't you

Very fun first chapter. I get the feeling Desmond will be tracking down that cult again and I cant wait to see what he learns when he does.

Yes. YES. YEEEEEES!
A NEW CHAPTER! XD
Your writing style is amazing: the way you describe things makes the reader easily imagine the scene and understand the characters' points of view.
I missed your story, this chapter really made my day! Thank you so much!

Oh, crap. I would have chosen a more colourful word, but hey.
Desmond is in trouble~. Dang, the Stormcloaks are going to find him, aren't they? Damn. He's going to be on everyone's side in this. He just wants his apple for crying out loud!
Nevertheless, I'm kinda hoping he wakes up alone. That won't happen, of course, but hey, it's worth a hope.
Alright. Nice chapter. I'll be waiting in earnest for the next chapter!
~ BP2

I like it so far!