I love this, it's very beautifully done and very poetic. Wonderful job!

Sort of knew this would be beautiful from the summary. I was not wrong. Wonderful explanation Fiyero's feelings, especially as he's a character whose wisdom and acts often get forgotten in light of Elphaba.

Beautiful! Simply beautiful! You're a talented writer. Thank you for sharing this story.

I loved this! Fiyero going from 'not a hero' to selflessly helping Elphaba survive (basically heroic but at the same time idiotic!)
I wish I was better at reviews, but the main thing is that this was a wonderful one-shot!