Aaaah, I enjoyed reading those Kurapika chapters :D. I wish there was more :(.

The feels from that birthday present and the loneliness of the coming of age dinner. So many feels.

Aaaah, love the Kurapika part! So well-writtennnn :D

Omg that was so good. You captured so well the distress Leorio felt, the sorrow and the guilt. I loved it, and I loved how he broke down but then stood up to save that boy. He's such a strong soul ;-;

Killua's voicemail made me laugh XD I love how Alluka butted in to stop him from butchering the birthday message x) It was so sweet too that Kurapika thought of him! (If I remember well Gon didn't call Killua? ;A; )

I'll be waiting for Kurapika's :) Good job!

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That was a really sweet read! I like your writing style, it's really pleasant and it fits the kind of story you're writing. It overall feels warm yet nostalgic and it flows so well.

I like how you explored Alluka's feelings regarding Killua, the way she's insecure about being a burden. Same goes with Killua wishing one person would contact him; it's so pure overall. Alluka is right, Killua really is the best big brother :')

Also I LOVE the way you made Alluka such a creative and talented person. Cooking, painting, playing various instruments and reading... that gives a whole new side to her personality and I love it. You made her a fast-learner and a smart person!

Now I have an idea about what Alluka asks and I'm curious to see how Killua will react ;)

Good chapter! Hope to see more from you :)