Reviews for The Girl with the Sugar Lips
cherriesandgin chapter 5 . 9/17
I know it's been a couple years since you posted anything, but I would kill for a couple Esme POV one shots. Especially when she notices Bella wearing the necklace and puts 2 and 2 together.
Guest chapter 20 . 6/18/2019
I read Man in Elevator first and it intrigued me. I figured this would display Edward's manly side. But it didn't. It read just like the other story. Almost word for word. As for the confident man we met in Man in Elevator... where was he?
Gagika chapter 20 . 8/10/2018
I enjoyed reading his point of view. Thanks!
Guest chapter 20 . 5/13/2018
Love reading it from EPV. You did a great job. Also loved the original but for me hearing the male point of view is always more interesting. Thank you for the editing, sometimes stories are so poorly edited that I actually get a head ache from all the mental changes. Looking forward to reading future works.
cullensrule chapter 20 . 4/29/2018
Thank you for Edward's side of the story. It was great to see his side of the story.
amogle chapter 20 . 1/27/2018
Loved it
pnkats chapter 20 . 1/27/2018
such a perfect ending. as always I love Edwards pov a lot. so glad you gave us this
Sara aka Nikki Black chapter 16 . 1/27/2018
I had forgotten that they ruined their night. I wish Jasper had reached them sooner so neither one would have gotten hurt.
DutchGirl01 chapter 20 . 1/25/2018
Loved the ending, thanks so much for sharing this story with us.
melissamary55 chapter 20 . 1/24/2018
Love it and can't wait for the epi and what the future has for them
Guest chapter 20 . 1/22/2018
Great
Romana973 chapter 20 . 1/24/2018
Thanks for a great chapter!
midnitereader chapter 20 . 1/24/2018
It's wonderful to see their story from Edward's POV. He's such a worrier. He knows to make the right decisions where work is concerned, but with love he's just as uncertain as everyone else. He's grown so much. He's learned it's okay to move on and find love again. It's okay to be happy. I can't wait to see what the future holds for them.
NKubie chapter 20 . 1/23/2018
I've really enjoyed the story from the EPOV! I hadn't realized how truly nervous he was.

xo
Nan
Mistydeb chapter 20 . 1/23/2018
Aww, poor Edward, he nearly wrapped himself up in knots there for a bit, he really does over think everything. At least she said yes, even if she isn’t ready just yet. His journey has been a long one, but he got there in the end. Debbie
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