Reviews for The main story of a side character: Haruno Sakura
Guest chapter 12 . 11/29/2016
I'm loving your story! Yea sasuke what are you doing there! I can't wait for the next chapter! Sooooooooo update soon por fa!
WhiteMartian4ever chapter 11 . 11/19/2016
Oh my god I missed you so much loving the story as always :) they're just a few things that I am hoping to see you in the future of the story Sakura and Hinata friendship and Matchmaker Sakura and I'm hoping that just because she regains all her memories back doesn't means that she loves Sasuke again that boy needs to work for her affection thank you for the Chapter and can't wait to read the next one upload soon please;)
Sophiebybophie chapter 10 . 10/19/2016
I really love your OC's they're so so COOL! And creative! lol Kakashi's reaction to everything was great XD! So happy the West and east are getting along~! Browns reaction to Kakashi made me laugh XD she's such a dork! love your story Author-san!
weedysofi chapter 8 . 10/10/2016
Duuuuude I live in chile reading this was amazing!
Nilaca chapter 7 . 10/4/2016
I do like the length of your chapters. Seems that you can pull out lots of imagination which is massively good!
Your cliffhangers are so heartbreaking though! Great job :)
Nilaca chapter 1 . 10/4/2016
I do like the idea. But you should really care more about the language and the tenses in particular. I hate to write this but there is a huge amount of mistakes which lowers the quality of your fiction.
I want to be constructive there, I hope you're gonna make the most of it
KellytheKid chapter 7 . 10/2/2016
I'm so hyped for the next chapter
Guest chapter 5 . 9/26/2016
Aahhhhh I need more
itachi13080 chapter 5 . 9/25/2016
NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO... T-T
That was SO FREAKING E.V.I.L. :'(
Great job on the suspense and how amazingly everything was written out! :D You hit the nail on EVERY character! They were all spot on! ;)
Thank you for updating and also answering my question's. :) I'm so excited in seeing the big reunion! Let the players start the game! Sorry, I'm just trying to image all the ways that you can write it and I know it's going to be epic. ;P
Once again, thank you very much in sharing your world with us. :D
Dropsofchocolate chapter 5 . 9/25/2016
Damn it! Just make themeet already!
KellytheKid chapter 1 . 9/25/2016
I like it
f-zelda chapter 5 . 9/25/2016
Hope to see the update. How will Sasuke reacts to see Sakura again? And what about james he will appear again looking for the love of Rose or samething? The bad boss is the brother of james? or someone from the shinobi world?
itachi13080 chapter 4 . 9/24/2016
I'm going to be honest, I am LOVING this story! :D You created a beautiful world by adding to the Shinobi world. Making the Shinobi world just a part of an even bigger one AND introducing new original characters that have LIFE to them is very hard to do. I give you respect for doing it and also making it believable too. ;)
The way that you are pacing the story is perfect. I'm actually glad that it took you until chapter 4 for Sakura/Rose to come back to the Leaf Village. It gave us, the readers, time to get familiar with the New World and it's characters. As well as the growth from Sakura/Rose, as the years passed.
Question Time! ;P Will you be 'showing' us some of the events that happened with Sakura/Rose and her new team, in the past five years? Will we get more details on James and his brother later on? Does Calvin have feelings for James other then friendship? And vice versa. (Cause when James knocked Calvin out and fought against Sakura/Rose, that had a strange feeling to it. In a good way of course. Like James was Sasuke, Calvin was Sakura and Sakura/Rose was Naruto. Then Calvin waking up screaming like that. It remained me bit of when Sasuke left and the big fight that he had with Naruto.)
Ok aside from that! :P I'm totally excited and a bit anxious about what will happen next. Oh, almost forgot, who exactly are they chasing? And will everything go down in the Shinobi world or in both worlds now? Like lets say something important or big in terms of storyline for our characters is coming from the New World and we get a small glimpse of it. Which later on has an impact on the Shinobi world or the world as a whole.
...Crap...sorry I went too deep into this. My bad. :P That being said, PLEASE CONTINUE sharing more of this awesome world with us! ;D
WhiteMartian4ever chapter 4 . 9/24/2016
I am loving this fanfiction the only thing I was hoping for was a deeper explanation off the Western mythology because Naruto has a lot of Asian mythology mixed into it, anyway I'm hoping Sasuke is still a retard when it comes to emotions like he is in the anime and manga lol can't wait for your next chapter
f-zelda chapter 4 . 9/24/2016
Hope to see what happends to james soon! See you in the next chapter hope you will update soon.
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