Please hurry with the next chapter

that is good. update soon please.

your portrayal of akane is very poor and ooc

Awesome man. Please update soon.

This Story is Awesome! I want to read the next chapter soon so please update this story.

1 again, where are the miraculous powers? Cataclysm is designed to destroy inanimate objects, you know, like that giant pot.
2 ladybugs magic doesn't get the utterly out, it's breaking the item they possess.

The setup is good, but so many details are overlooked that it gets distracting

Ok, a few questions:
1 why didn't the 2 heroes use their abilities (ladybug's lucky charm, which I call the magufin device, and cat noire's cataclysm, which has amazing destructive capabilities) either could have turned the tide of that battle
2 speaking of, I'm pretty sure that they don't time out UNLESS they use said abilities
3 I feel like making ranma that much stronger than those 2, even if accurate to the series, Brings into question how they would be useful or the enemies would be a threat
4 didn't we see in the pixilator episode that ladybug's miracle can heal her?
5 wouldn't both ladybug and cat noire generally be agile enough to dodge a hulking brute?

The story itself is good, though I would offer my services as a beta for the spelling and grammar. In addition, does ranma have any reason to not take credit for his skill? He may not want to rub it in, and nerima may be hell, but he's always taken pride in his fighting skill.

Like the idea, but the script style ruins the immersion.

Interesting idea and story!

I like your Idea, I really do. And the chapter is strong at the beginning, but then. you start with the chat protocol writing. No mimic, gestures or any body language or backgrounds.
If you plan on rewriting this with a living world style instead of a chat protocol style I will gladly read it. But this, I am sorry I can't read it.

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Duh, of course the curse will act up, even in another country, silly Ranma.
Was that some foreshadowing? Ryoga getting lost and ending up an akuma?

sorry it bug me since the start but you know that collège in France its before lycée (high school) witch mean ranma is older than everyone and should ne un lycée and not un college

He he he, really great end there, keep going