| Reviews for Jaune Arc's DLC |
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   GnarlyTeeth chapter 5 . 12/5/2018 I like this story, it's pretty good |
| Gizmo Gear chapter 5 . 10/23/2018 Hmmmm. Its getting better. Can't wait for more! |
| Gizmo Gear chapter 3 . 10/23/2018 Hey, while you are taking that long to put chapters up, does that mean they are gonna be a bit higher in quality? No offense, but it kinda hurts to read this. I am enjoying it anyway, my mind filling in the blanks and correcting mistakes pretty much automatically. |
| Gizmo Gear chapter 2 . 10/22/2018 Ugh. The idea is great, but your execution of it...not so much... I'll finish it later. Once I have managed to drag my brain out of the garbage bin... |
| dirtrevor chapter 3 . 2/13/2017 While this entertaining, I would like to know where the -100 affection with Weiss schnee came from. Forgive me if it obvious. |
| sundrawnshadow chapter 5 . 2/13/2017 update! |
| Grimninjax chapter 4 . 1/27/2017 Thois is a amazing god damn story |
| commandosquirrel chapter 5 . 1/25/2017 I hope this gets updated more regularly too |
| Silver chapter 4 . 12/9/2016 Dang the story is so good please update |
| NinjaFang1331 chapter 4 . 11/5/2016 Awesome job |
| NinjaFang1331 chapter 3 . 11/5/2016 Awesome job with the chapter and how things are going with Jaune |
| NinjaFang1331 chapter 1 . 11/5/2016 Great first chapter |
| Shashenka chapter 4 . 10/27/2016 Love the story so far its really great and I hope you continue it! However I'm just wondering where will call of duty fit into all of this? |
| Zyxis Ouroboros ReArchtypist chapter 4 . 10/26/2016 YAAAAAAYYYYYYY NEW CHAPTER |
| Remzal Von Enili chapter 4 . 10/26/2016 I wonder if he'll get to see any of the undertale AU worlds. |
