This was a fantastic story. Your last chapter had me laughing my ass off.

It's clear you were very young when you wrote this.
The language is that of a teenager.
Regardless...this story is great.
The writing is descriptive in body movements and facial expressions.
Great job.

update soon plz loved it want more

Jajajajajajaja. Thor has to wait for now!

CG is playing here. He does not finished the contract with Kendall, yet. So, if Ana knows about it, that could be explosive.

Oh how I loved this story thank you

That was really cute, hope you write some that is just as romantic and cute.

Funny as hell, enjoyed the read and the laughs. Thank you. :-)

I absolutely loved your story! I can't believe I never read this!

Oh my lord I never laughed so hard in my life still got tears coming love this last part yes this is the way to end it oh lordy mercy you are something else

Oh my goodness I found this story today and BBC started it and just about finished with it. I absolutely love it Christian and Ana had some rough spots was worried about the pedophile bitch but no problem there happy she didn't interfere with Christian. Wow Kendall was something else I know she wasn't only mad and acting hurt that she found out b.c about Christian and Ana but the little bitch was jealous too.
Christian tried to tell Abs but she refused to listen that was her fault and damn Jose he shouldn't have kept the letter from Ans that was wrong it was her choice what she wanted to do about Christian not him
He deserved getting his nose broke especially after grabbing Ana and making her fall some friend he is
Kate and Elliot are on her side through all this and Christian's too Elliot is helping them both not believing what the little bitch said
Love this do much you are amazing
Oh my Kate is sick could she be pregnant say it ain't so after all the bitching she did to Ana

Jajajajajja.

Stupid Kendall. She is out of place here.

Kendall es sólo una sumisa que quería más, ella lo está teniendo mal pq quiere.
Ana es amiga de ella, peto lo su su BBF,sólo se conocen de semanas y ella no le dijo la verdad a Ana de esa relación. No era su novio.

Y si C debió debe de ir a Ana más temprano que tarde.

So much fun !