Reviews for Just One Chance
friendsandlovers chapter 8 . 6/5
Loved this one just as much the second time around reading it as the first.
cullenlover88 chapter 8 . 4/22
nice, too bad it wasn't longer
Djejdjdjendkd chapter 8 . 4/5
Wonderful story. I wish there truly were men like that. I have yet to find one sadly. Apparently having hair is a deal breaker. I wish there were an infinite number of Edward’s n the world. Every person deserves a sweet man that can see the beauty inside.
JojoJinx chapter 8 . 3/6
Such a good story. My only complaint... I want moreeeeeee. Pleeeease. I can't help being greedy when you write like this and made me fall in love with your characters. I want to witness bella meeting edwards son, plenty more bella and edward alone time... Meeting each others family and friends... Emmett meeting bella again would be good. Edward bumping into Peter and the fact he finds Peter revolting and scum evident... Though your writing is beautiful and delicate and so much better then a little big load of drama so I'm guessing bella and edward will win that meeting by there clear disinterest or care of him or what he has to say... and they go on and have a great day. Meanwhile Peter can rot away with the knowledge of how badly he treated a woman with a heart of gold and how little and untrustworthy his promises will now be and mean .
sosueme chapter 8 . 12/21/2019
Amazing portrayal of feelings, fears, life. You don't shy away from the hard ones, kudos.
cullengirl08 chapter 8 . 10/3/2019
Loved the story! This was great from start to finish!
BellaTesoro chapter 8 . 9/21/2019
And isn't that the truth, we all have warts, some kind of baggage. I'm glad that this Bella found a man like this Edward. Sweet story. Thank you for sharing!
BellaTesoro chapter 7 . 9/21/2019
Oh Edward had two things in his past that needed to come out, a son and his DUI when he was young. I see why Edward would need to get both of those things out there. Bella seems to handle those issues very maturely and with an open mind. I like how open and honest Edward is.
BellaTesoro chapter 6 . 9/21/2019
Yay, Bella ask him to come in for...and she got her sweet dessert. I admire Edward for holding back a little until he gets to let Bella really get to know him.
BellaTesoro chapter 5 . 9/21/2019
I love how they are now starting out by communicating. Next step, dinner and...
BellaTesoro chapter 4 . 9/21/2019
It took Edward expressing how his week has been so rough which allow Bella's kind side to reach out to Edward. Coffee sounds like a great way to start out.
BellaTesoro chapter 3 . 9/21/2019
It took a lot of bravery to call 911 and those EMT's handled the situation so well given the circumstances. It's sad that Bella feels she isn't worthy of dating someone especially someone as hot as she thinks Edward is.
BellaTesoro chapter 2 . 9/21/2019
I'm appreciating reading a story that has character's who have real life problems and aren't picture perfect. I can feel Bella's frustration and hurt from having to deal with the aftermath of her accident and being in a wheelchair. That she hasn't worked out enough to be independent enough to solve some of her everyday problems. And that her husband is detaching from their marriage and maybe he isn't strong enough to deal with Bella anymore and here she is literally stuck and she has no one she's comfortable calling for help so she calls emergency workers. I hope Peter feels throughly guilty for letting his wife struggle like this when all he had to do was pick up the damn phone.
BellaTesoro chapter 1 . 9/21/2019
You had me at the A/N explaining this story was written for Fandom for Mental Awareness. We need more attention put into that issue. Thank you for being part of it.
I love this Edward already. He's nervous about seeking out Bella in the gym. And the premise of Bella in a wheelchair working out at a gym and all flustered because 'someone as handsome as this Edward' would take notice of her gives me all the right feels for a good plot point. I like all your stories. Glad I found this one too.
freedom2604 chapter 8 . 3/30/2019
Hiiii ! Thank you so much for writing really nice stories and for allowing them to be translated.
You have a great talent, keep doing that
and sorry for my English really sucks...
See ya.. :)
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