P.D. : muy buena historia

Me gusta la trama de esta historia, tiene su dosis de misterios, intrigas, conflictos, dolor y pérdida... pero también de esperanza... creo que se está gestando un plan... es Odin quién decidió mandar a asesinar a la familia de Loki?

Update more chapters about this story,because it's the best,extra and the great story that I was reading about it,and I am also starting to love and to like reading to this story. So can you please write more chapters,because I want to know what happens in the next chapters about it. THANKS SO MUCH FOR WRITTEN TO THIS STORY,thanks so much about it.&&&£££%%%$$$

please update love it

I'M SO EXCITED FOR THIS STORY I'M IN LOVE WITH IT!

I honestly don't know what to say this was sad

This is lovely so far and I hope to read more soon

ADD MORE PLEASE!

Hmmm... Interesting so far... I hope to see more soon!

Four brothers and one sister...with still more to go? I'm unclear as to who is missing?

Sleipnir
Vali
Narfi
Fenrir
Jormungandr
Sigyn

Who is missing since Hela and loki are sill alive?

I love the idea of reincarnation in general, and it fits nicely withing these two universes.

I really like the start of the story and I look forward to where you take this. Harry and Loki in whatever combination is always a draw for me.

Though I know it's annoying for the author to receive nit picking reviews, it's just as annoying for a reader to find wrong words used. Misspellings are fine, but choosing the wrong word for the context is jarring and interrupts the flow of the story.

Ex: "Threw" means the past tense of throwing something, like a ball. "Through" is probably the word you meant given the context of the sentence in Ch 1.

Ex: "with nether and laugh of a sneer to give" I don't actually know what you meant with this.

Ex: "signed" should probably be "sighed"

Ex: "power white skin" should probably be "powder"

Still, I'm engaged with your story and I'm off to read more.

update soon

good story!

i like it, please update soon.