Reviews for Gems are Unbreakable
ParLemon chapter 15 . 5/12
Man this is some good stuff. I really hope you continue this story!
:)
B1GM00D chapter 15 . 4/14
so the death toll is:
peridot
stevonnie
lapis
and pearl.
disbun chapter 15 . 4/6
I've binged this entire fic in like two days and I don't think I've ever been so stressed yet so hyped while reading something before. The fight scenes in JJBA always do something crazy unexpected, and I feel like something like that would be extremely hard to write but you've done it wonderfully! I felt like I was on the edge of my seat the whole time, even though I was lying in my bed at like 1am. Throughout this entire fic I kept having to take breaks because I was so stressed and excited about what was happening.
I kind of have no idea whats happening between Sardonyx and Josuke, but in a good way! I don't think I've come across a fight like this before and its really interesting. It feels like Josuke's powers have changed a bit, and its very intriguing.
And I honestly forgot Stray Cat was a thing so I was shocked when you brought it back, the game has changed. I'm really worried about Stevonnie and Lapis now, I hope they don't get even more hurt but who knows!
Also, I keep thinking that Josuke might be able to bring Peridot back to life. I know he wasn't able to do it for his grandfather, but she's a gem so it might be different? Also Steven could help too, if he doesn't die horribly or something in this fight.
Anyway these are just my silly musings haha. I hope you're staying safe during this pandemic, you can update this fic whenever you feel like you're ready. Please don't believe anyone who says your writing is bad because this is seriously one of the best fics I have read. I look forward to more of this story in the future!
Guest chapter 15 . 3/29
please try to update soon
clown2107 chapter 15 . 2/16
Hey, I hope you haven't forgotten this story, I feel you can't leave it now since we're in one of the most tense moments in history.
I don't know if I said it, but I will say that putting Josuke as the jojo in this story is one of the most successful things I've seen in a crossover story, I wonder why Josuke hasn't tried to use Crazy Diamond's ability to reverse the fusion of gems? I explain: in the anime / manga, Crazy Diamond has the ability to rebuild things to their original state (except living things), in one chapter Josuke used this ability to separate the ingredients from a meal, so I don't know why Josuke doesn't use this ability against fusion gems, maybe because they are living beings?.
It was also time for you to give Josuke a new skill, since it seemed unfair that only Kira had new abilities like in the manga / anime, I wonder if this fusion can change in size, since it seems somewhat disadvantageous that it only has giant size.
I find it curious that the fusions can see the Stands, maybe because the fusions are "transcendent" beings, although I can be wrong since in the previous chapters Garnet despite being a fusion does not seem to see Crazy Diamond.
Since Stray Cat is with Kira, and I thought that cat had stayed in the world of jojo, I feel that in the future Stray Cat could be an ally of Josuke and the crystal gems, you just have to know how to tame him.
It would be interesting that in the future you introduce homerworld gems, especially the diamonds, since I feel you would give them more variety of villains in history, and I suppose you have already seen the entire Steven Universe series, right?.

PS: Regarding your old "friends" who say you have a crap writing, that's a lie, your friends are idiots and I bet they said it out of pure rage, you have one of the most detailed writings I've seen in a fanfic, don't listen to those guys.
Well, that's it, I hope to see more updates in the near future.
PLEASE READ ME chapter 1 . 2/10
The gem empire steels, brainwashs and programs dead heros from world's through a process similar to materia from final fantasy stealing heroes directly from the throne of heroes from each world. what's next a planet-sized holy Grail that is black that will mimic the Black Star dragon balls from dragon Ball z and the wish has to be completed by destroying planets other competitors or something?
The Twilit Lord chapter 4 . 1/3
I can't believe Vidalia's fucking dead
NestorHdez chapter 1 . 12/9/2019
Forgive Spanish. My English is bad and I don't trust the translator.
Asombroso en todo el sentido de la palabra compañero. En verdad tu eres de los pocos que desean transmitir concretamente la idea de un crossover y el choque de dos universos completamente diferentes. Aun que simplemente sean dos personajes de JoJo’s dan un claro de ejemplo de lo que pueden lograr los humanos y que tan subestimados pueden llegar a ser por seres más poderosos. Una pena que la creadora de S.U. solo se enfocara en las gemas, puedo hacer algo con los seres humanos.
Pero lo que en verdad aplaudo fue la interacciones que tubo Kira Yoshikage con Steven. Wow, viniendo de otro Fic no tardarían en ir directamente a enfrentarlo o el clásico cliché de los Villanos y Héroes se unen a sus iguales para enfrentarse. Yo en verdad ame como Kira manipulo a Steven a través de sus emociones, lo cual lo lleva a su situación actual. Y el enfrentamiento de Josuke contra las Gemas, algo realmente bien escrito y coordinado, casi me siento inverso en la pelea.
Además, puedes sentir los sentimientos que deseas transmitir en los párrafos donde los personajes sufren alguna perdida o un desgarramiento emocional, aunque debo de admitir que en algunos casos están algo exagerados estos, sobre todo las sesiones de lágrimas de las gemas.
Honestamente me hubiera gusta ver al Steven de 16 años en esa situación (para que se baje de ese pedestal de “Salvador del Universo”) aun que es solo un capricho mío. Solo espero que todo esto tenga repercusiones irreparables para los involucrados, no simplemente una experiencia traumática o desgarradora. Stevonnie puede ser una oportunidad, y que para salvarla necesiten hacer algo que no se pueda cambiar, aun que solo es una idea.
Amaría que esta historia continúe desarrollándose para que NO se quede entre las “Gemas de Cristal” y “Kira/Josuke”. El Universo es bastante grande para que solo unos pocos conozcan lo peligrosos que son los “Stands”. Después de todo estas desarrollando tu historia cerca de los acontecimientos del “Zoológico Humano”. Con un poco de esfuerzo puedes usar eso realmente a tu favor.
Creo que me extendí demasiado. Aun así, gracias por esta excelente historia compañero, el mundo necesita a mas escritores con tu imaginación y originalidad. Muchas gracias.
PD: ¿Crees que Giorno Giovanna puede convertir una Gema en un ser Vivo?
Guest chapter 15 . 11/23/2019
holy shit! thanks for the chapter the fight was really well set. :)
Psaro chapter 15 . 11/8/2019
This, this is honestly phenomenal, best fic I've read In a long time
Mr pancake800 chapter 15 . 11/8/2019
Wow. Each chapter is as long as a bible. I’m impressed with your dedication. Good work!
jaalco chapter 15 . 11/1/2019
i just want to say that i love your style of writing, where it is written from one character's perspective while remaining in third person. it really helps a reader visualise what's going through that character's head at any given time.
Brass chapter 15 . 10/17/2019
Take all the time you need for the next chapter. I dare say your style of writing is on par with Araki himself! Keep up the good work and dont let anyone get you down.
Cloud Narukami chapter 15 . 10/11/2019
Please update The requiem of Remnant soon
3812458345 chapter 2 . 10/8/2019
Nice, this chapter was even better than the last, a hefty length as well. I look forward to reading more.
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