this is a really great story. i really enjoyed it. i cant wait for your next one. later.

this first chapter is so sweet i cant wait to read the rest

Vomit.

GROOVY COOL INCREDIBLE NIFTY INCREDIBLE AND NICE AND INCREDIBLE AND STUPENDOUS AND INCREDIBLE AnD PERFECT and oh! did i meantion INCREDIBLE? I believe I did! That story TOTALLY rocked~! ;) _ from !MeldAvanE!

Oh I loved it! :) This was soo good! Wow you really wrote a lot today. I couldn't tear my eyes away from it! I hope you start another story soon. I LOVED this one!

Congrats on your car.

~Stary Night~

I love it, I love it! The relationship between Legolas and Melri actually sounds feasible. There are too many fics out there where the characters seem to be together simply because they fancy the pants off each other, but this relationship is really deep and emotional. Love the way you handled the bedroom scene too. ;o) How soon are you going to post the next chapter, or am I going to have to threaten to hide your car til you write some more?

NEW car? i liked the chapter. romantic, sappy, sad, angsty, and all that other stuff. can't wait for the update

~melissa greeleaf~

yah... your story rules, and mine drools... thats MY poetic side... _ yah! nah, i can come up with better stuff, if i try... Life is like a fly, its born, it lives it dies... ;)

*MeldAvanE*

LOL :P great poem! _~. I can't wait wut happens next _ I can't believe how quick u can write these chapters! It takes me months ~_~... well I love it so keep on writing .

i am really sorry to do this to you, but I can only think of one word to describe your work.

WOW

~melissa greenleaf~

OMG THAT WAS GREAT! I can't wait to see wut happens next! this is in my favs!

Yah! That totally rocked! please continue and i swear my loyalty to you P yah.. thats it! bye

so cool! r you going to finish it?

cause plese do!

It's late so I dont have time for a long review, but that was wonderful! Please please please update soon :)

i don't see any Mary-Sueness

i hope there won't be any!

good story though