Reviews for Hermione Granger and the Yule Review
sfescher chapter 19 . 3/12/2019
This was a good sequel. It started to give me the feels near the end. I'm really enjoying these stories. Excited (but also sad?) to start the last one.

I hope this doesn't come across the wrong way, but I really like how your writing style is simple, yet so full of life. It makes your stories very enjoyable to read.
PastelDreaming chapter 5 . 12/12/2016
HAHAHAHA NEVILLE
SmileSimplify chapter 19 . 10/15/2016
Ch 17-19
The ending was heartbreaking but fitting; guess the story returns to canon from this point onwards. :(

We never did find out what Blaise was up to. Plus, a detail I noticed from the first fic and also in this one but kept forgetting to inquire about until this point, why was Ginny sharing the form with the Gryffindor girls a year ahead of her? She should have been w/ her yearmates, yes?
SmileSimplify chapter 16 . 10/15/2016
Ch 15-16
Ummm... fried bread? Did RW mean like grilled bread (as in grilled cheese sandwich) or something like French toast?

Another study session, more revelations, more hurt feelings. :(
SmileSimplify chapter 14 . 10/15/2016
Ch 13-14
Ah! The butter placed on the Gryffindor doe dining table was spiked with love potion! That is one very potent and long-lasting love potion seeing as its effect still lingers two days after.

DM must be traumatized after having been sniffed by Ronald Weasley! XD

I didn't think HG would latch on to the fact that the Draco she just spoke with at the library was the fake one.
SmileSimplify chapter 12 . 10/15/2016
Ch 11-12
HG is amusingly OOC in this AU. She embellishes on facts just to see DM squirm. Tsk, tsk.

Now that HG and the real DM have talked, will they try to solve the mystery by themselves or get the help of Professor Snape?
SmileSimplify chapter 10 . 10/15/2016
Ch 9-10
Wait! What?! Ginny, Minnie, AND Colin suddenly all have the hots for Draco?! And fake Draco becoming more forward and naughtier. Whoa! O.O
SmileSimplify chapter 8 . 10/15/2016
Ch 7-8
Why is Ginny acting weirdly? It can't be because of the flower pollen or thorns as she wasn't the only one who was in contact with those, yes?

And where is fake Draco now?

BTW, 'I've never done the killing curse before, so you'll have to forgive me if it takes me more than one try.' is morbidly funny. *chuckle*
SmileSimplify chapter 6 . 10/15/2016
Ch 6
Ummm... WHERE is the REAL Draco while his doppelgänger is making a spectacle of himself?

Since Blaise was mentioned in this chapter, I just realized that you never did let us in on what he was planning with the other Slytherins in the first fic.

Lastly, "casualties" imply that some students died because of the flower bombardment. That is obviously not the case. "Victims" or "injured" would have been better word choices.
SmileSimplify chapter 5 . 10/15/2016
Ch 4
Egads! What has Draco u leashed?! o.O

Ch 5
The ending was hilarious! Neville's muttering was the cherry on top. XD So, the alter-Draco accessed Draco's vault and ordered bunches and bunches and bunches of flowers for he's heart's desire?
SmileSimplify chapter 3 . 10/15/2016
Ch 3
You certainly know how to ruin the moment, HG! Then again, since they've only begun their tentative friendship recently and haven't been nurturing it lately, neither quite yet knows triggers the other may have.
SmileSimplify chapter 2 . 10/15/2016
Ch 2
Bigger fish to fry indeed! CC had definitely crossed into stalker territory! O.o
SmileSimplify chapter 1 . 10/15/2016
Ch 1
I like the way you set up that last line in the chapter. :) And the descriptions of the costumes - worn by teachers and students - were very amusing. :D
ClaraGrimm chapter 18 . 10/11/2016
Thankyou for updating !
IWasn'tTalkingToYou chapter 18 . 10/3/2016
wait whaaaasat?¿?!;
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