Reviews for Beginnings of a dream
Guest2 chapter 17 . 8/2
I know it has been a year (again) but i really hope you start updating this story it has a good premise and a good plot and this story dosent have nearly engouf regocnision from the community and I hope that if you keep updating (witch i really hope you do) that it starts getting more recocnition from the community because this fic deserves it
Reaperdan81 chapter 9 . 6/3
I tried ,but enough is enough
icecatfire chapter 2 . 7/10/2019
*Squeeeeeeeeeeee* THANK YOU SHANKS AND MAKINO FOR BRINGING THE *REAL* LUFFY BACK!
Legianreader2003 chapter 17 . 5/26/2019
Love your story hope you update soon and please dont abandon it
Ryan Mashall chapter 17 . 3/19/2019
Ehh? Dont put buggy in the crew, he’s just a pain to deal with, get someone from skypia or smthn bt not buggy. Also thank u sm for th update! Good work
abciluvpie chapter 6 . 1/30/2019
You have broken canon already, so why the hell not.
abciluvpie chapter 5 . 1/30/2019
He is more a Hinedere than Tsundere, and Tsun isn't a deny, its violent, he isn't violent against near anyone who is close to him so far.
abciluvpie chapter 2 . 1/30/2019
I'm going to ignore the things that couldn't happen in the east blue.
Ale chapter 17 . 1/10/2019
Cuanto es la recompensa de luffy
Phantomdream chapter 12 . 1/11/2019
Nice scene! Question did you base that scene where Mihawk was sick on a scene from Skip Beat because I laughed myself to death at the comparison.
Succes with the rest!
Jordansdevil chapter 17 . 1/9/2019
I kind of want to see the brothers reactions to luffy getting a bounty already,hehehe al the brocon. Thanks for the update!
Legianreader2003 chapter 1 . 7/16/2018
Love your story hope you update soon Good work white the story
Guest chapter 16 . 6/16/2018
This chapter is amazing. It was especially funny when at the end, the crew was mad at Shanks for beating Luffy.
I think it is a good idea to have Luffy meet Rayleigh now, and then later you could have his crew meet him as well for their coating. then it would already be guaranteed that he would help him.
Also, have you ever thought of if they crossed the island Luffy was a slave at, how would Luffy react? Would he like set the nobles house on fire or something?
I hope you update this amazing story soon.
BeeTheBee chapter 16 . 6/7/2018
*Silently waits for an update in a corner, crying because I’m so caught up in this god damn story*
Legianreader2003 chapter 3 . 5/20/2018
Pleas uptade soon it's an amazing story
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