Ahhhhhh, how on earth did I never come across this lovely little story before?! I must be slipping! Anyway, Cato and Clove are my babies, and you've characterized them so nicely! ! ! Especially Clove, oh my goodness. That first section is especially perfect! ! ! "As she grew up, she told herself that she wasn't afraid of anything. Not a thing." is just a beautiful pair of lines! ! ! I love scary little Clove and how she just doesn't seem to understand other people- she's glad that their conversation is over, she doesn't understand why Cato's upset on the train- and it all just works so well! Very nicely done! :)

Hey, Poke!

I really didn't see any grammar or spelling mistakes. I mean, in the book her head is smashed with a rock, and in the movie, the Cornucopia. I think it's cool how you changed it to a tree. It's unique. I've always loved Clove and Cato, especially together, and I don't know why. They just seemed so cute!
Seriously, I didnt find anything wrong with it! Good job!
-Callie-