jaja pobre nick lo agarraron jaja

jajaa zorros tan nerviosos

ajaja si vi la serie y la peli me encantaba y jaja no me esperaba que quedasen juntos cher y su hermanastro y judi que valiente jaja

Very cute.

~Star

I can't describe the awesomeness of this oneshot! I loved loved loved it! I'm feeling all fluttery inside!

Really nice one shot. I like this kind of story.

cute keep it up my friend

A really nice, simple slice of life and lacking a lot of the general melodrama fics based around the Hopps family usually entail.

Hopefully this story will have so much fluffiness that it makes me forget just how much pain you put Nick through in your last story. The epilogue certainly helped but this story needs a shit ton of shipping to make me completely content. ( *-*)

The writing is definitely of the darn good variety and dialogue seems to be a strong suit of yours so that's also a plus. The end felt like it could use just a little more lengthening and fleshing out considering the build-up, but that's probably just me wanting more of the story than any actual criticism.

Now, if they want to be really mean to Pop-Pop Hopps they could admit to him that they were only pretending to be dating at first in order to prank him but then real feelings came to the surface and thus he was actually the catalyst to their fake-relationship-turn-real trope coming to fruition. XD