Okay, confession: I've seen your FMA works reblogged on tumblr, but never took the time to read them. I was skeptical of how this form would work for a fanfic, and didn't want to bother. But, wow, this is good. What you've written is lovely, and you nailed Roy and Riza. I love that the rest of the guys know that Riza is the only one who can go in to Roy and calm him from a nightmare.

I'll have to look at what else you've written!

Another good one! :)

I really like the format you chose for this. It kind of shakes it up from how most narratives are written. I think it's really fitting for this piece in particular because the short paragraphs make it feel hurried and fleeting, like a nightmare. Nicely done!

Beautiful, omg!

I know I've said so already, but I really love this.