It seems a bit rushed. After all, this is Ash we're talking about. A romantic relationship or thoughts should be the furthest things from his mind.

I'm liking it so far.
And nice reference with the Alolan Meowth typing.

Glad I finally caught up! Good chapter and I'm looking forward to whatever is in the egg. Hope to read an update soon!

Cute in its own right

Surprised Ash lost to Clemont but I understand why to an extent. Overall a good chapter introducing Clemont and Bonnie.

Great battle chapter. You do well to show how powerful the Kalos gym leaders are. I'm really looking forward to more chapters!

Litleo is so cute!

Solid battle and I like the deciding factors that led to Ash winning. Overall a good performance.

Omg I almost forgot Gladion was your pick for rival in Kalos. It's a great choice tbh!

Nice chapter with a quick catch for Shauna. Looking forward to reading more as each chapter passes.

Liked the changes you've added so far as well. Hope to see what else is in store sooner than later.

Very nice story as I said before and another great chapter. Interested to see how it develops as I relearn this story.

I really am happy rereading this especially with the choices you've made now that I remember them.

I started reading this fic years ago and stopped but I'm glad I'm starting over from the get go, it really was one of my faves

wow this is a really great chapter man, i look forward to seeing what the egg contains in the next chapter soon dude. as a fellow amourshipper i have this to say to you and to all my fellow amourshippers around the globe who support amourshipping, amourshipper and proud, remember that dudes and dudettes and keep up the good serenaandashshipping work dude.