Reviews for Touch
Jellie789 chapter 2 . 6/20
I like how they were together under the blanket, fingers linked. Liv was just there for her, without Amanda saying anything just yet.

Poor Amanda, things got pretty intense with being squashed up in the back, with no space, and the awful weather exacerbating the situation. I felt sorry for Carisi too, his hurt and confusion and worry for Amanda all too evident. I was so sad for him when he got back in the front seat.

I'm glad Fin has dropped them off at Olivia's. I hope now Amanda has reached out with that last text she can trust Olivia to help her with whatever is wrong.
Jellie789 chapter 1 . 6/12
I love how this has started and I am intrigued as to where it is going. I love them all hanging out together. Fin and Carisi's enthusiasm for the terrible movie and constantly snacking made me laugh. You portrayed Amanda's vulnerability so well I wanted to hug her myself! I am glad she has agreed to talk to Liv :)
nightowldreams chapter 5 . 7/17/2018
I love the set up for this story. I love the bear hug Liv gives Amanda in the car. I LOVE LOVE LOVE everything about the 'getting changed' scene. I love how Olivia never stops telling Amanda that it's not her fault and that what happened to her matters. I love how Liv lets her sleep in her arms on the floor. I love that she gives Amanda a couple of minutes to just cry without telling her she's awake. I love how she listens to Amanda tell her story and keeps reassuring her. I love how Olivia is shaken herself, and I love that Amanda notices and strokes her arm. I love this story.
KalenCaelli chapter 5 . 8/10/2017
Awe, I really like how you ended that story. Really nicely done.
KalenCaelli chapter 4 . 8/10/2017
Ok I really want to know what happened to Rollins. Hopefully the team can find the bastard who hurt her
KalenCaelli chapter 3 . 8/10/2017
Enjoying this story so far. Can't wait to see the next chapter
KalenCaelli chapter 2 . 8/10/2017
Great chapter. I like the idea of communicating via text
KalenCaelli chapter 1 . 8/10/2017
An interesting start to a story for sure. I really am enjoying it.
millscully chapter 5 . 8/2/2017
This story is so fucking perfect, the thing with their pinkies it's so fucking cute i cannot believe it. Thank you so much for writing this !
millscully chapter 1 . 6/30/2017
Hi, just wanted to tell you that i've read touch and it's sequel, they are both fucking amazing ! I cannot express how much i love them but seriously omg, they gave me all kind of felings, you are an amazing writer and i really, trully, wish and hope that you will be able to give us more stories like this ones, i've also read get hurt and it's sequel but i liked touch and don't let go better, even though get hurt it's great too. Thank you so much for giving us these amazing stories, and please keep writing for Olivia ! Love from Argentina !
Shoshanna33 chapter 5 . 1/28/2017
Wonderful story! I really liked the friendship between Amanda and Liv. You wrote it beautifully too. Nice work! Off to read the sequel...
Zebrastreifen chapter 5 . 10/15/2016
Oh my god! This is certainly one of the best A&O hurt/comfort fics I've ever read! I love your style of writing and your vocabulary amazes me! (English isn't my first language and even though I understood everything, I doubt I'll ever be able to actively use words like that...)
candi711 chapter 5 . 10/4/2016
Another great story you have created :) I loved that we're finally able to learn what truly happened to Amanda and that she agreed to try and get justice. I would be sad that it was so short if I didn't already know that you have started on a sequel. The way you used text messages to comunicate and in the end tied it all together with their finally conversation, I just thought it was perfect and exicuted in a really tasteful manner :) As for the discrepency of a plot whole you mentioned, the only thing I could think of while reading it was that Amanda doesn't think she was raped, but by definition (I think) any foreign object, body part or otherwise, penatrating a person without concent is rape.

Great job :) I can't wait to start on your next one!
candi711 chapter 4 . 10/4/2016
very cute and emotional chapter :) i can see Amanda slowly opening up more to Liv but she still has a way to go. What about the men who attacked her? there were two? or was this a nightmare where she added something? And Im not all convinced she wasn't raped. Amanda is very devistaed right noe more sure something terible happened. Greay chapter! I'm glad this story turned out longer than you planned because i couldn't imagine it any shorter.
candi711 chapter 3 . 10/3/2016
So we hot some details, but a lot is still missing... maybe soon huh :) Greta chapter, I love the way you're using text messaging as a way to get Amanda and Olivia to comunicate even when Amanda doesn't want to. It seems like askung for help that way is easier for the blonde. I ind of wished we jnew what was going on with the boys after seeing that freak out in the car, but then this story would probably be too long lol. I loved this.
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