You write Snape flawlessly. Bravo.

I loved this story

this was really nice and good developed! and i am totally with you, i am German and since i read allmost anything in English, i have realised, that i cannot read any fanfiction in german anymore. it doesn't Sound right in my head

This book is a ruby!

The text is so smooth. The wording is so precise and still laconic. It expresses quite complex ideas like "twisting the knife with surgical precision".

Too often I find very talented authors spread brilliant thoughts across several pages instead of one sentence. They do it for many reasons (I guess): fear to make the story too short, in order to indulge graphomania stroke, lack of experience in the topic they are trying to describe, etc.

This book is not like that. I'm surprised it has few reviews.

Dear author, thank you for sharing your talent with us. Also, thank you for the sequel.

Of all the Jane Austen characters to compare his physical appearance to Colonel Brandon didn’t come up? I’m just saying CB hits the mark. Hahaha

this was a beautiful story! the description of the kiss was so detailed! this was wonderful, thank you so much!

oohhh she asked him! and left it as a cliffy!

and I always try to review every chapter! if you're willing to write it, I'll review it *.* even if I'm impatient and leave short reviews most the time, so I can hurry and keep reading

great conversation in this chapter! I liked watching the gradual change in their tone. and the last line was awesome!

it's not very often that u see Severus as Harry's godfather in this pairing. I think it fits in with how u described everything!
and to your response, yes, I like your answers and different approaches to the questions!

suspicion of what? and I like how you've written both characters. very believable.

I wondered if that's what she was going to say! excellent chapter!

Chapter 2 is posted for both 2 and 3 and chapter 3 appears to be missing...

Ughhh I loved your story! Couldn’t put it down and I felt sad because it ended, and only to find out you did a sequel! Now if you’ll excuse me, I’ll go and read it ;)

What I like about this story is it is ALL good bits, Snape and Hermione bantering and opening up to one another.

This is a very enjoyable story. I have read it at least a couple of times since it was completed. I like the back and forth between Snape and Hermione.

Just one quibble... Arthur Weasley's youngest offspring is Ginevra. Any danger of pregnancy from a liaison between Hermione and Ginevra requires further explanation.

(Guest review with this content was from me - don't know why it came through as guest)