I think having Ray as the Bishop is a slightly off choice in one respect, as the Bishop gave out of his poverty, while Ray is giving out of his wealth, but he does have the same giving and caring heart the Bishop has.

Oh my gosh this is absolutely brilliant! I am totally in love with this story - it's so well crafted! Can't wait for more :)

I am seriously squeeing in my bed right now from reading this. I can't put it down, even though I should have gone to bed hours ago. this is just, it's so amazing how you've worked the characters around each other, and I love how wally fits in all this. I came wait to read more., but also can't help but comment on every chapter.

Aw, aw! you just... you know, I almost felt like the chapter and words flew by too quickly, but then it suddenly seemed to stop when it got to Henry's point of view at the end. it actually really worked for this scene though since Henry is jumpy, flightful, guilty and angry at himself, and thinking in the moment during this scene. it was nice to have that sudden halt when he got mad at himself for stealing again and his decision to start a new.

nah, I actually think Joe is portrayed very well. It's a nice blend of the character to still have the familiarity of jeo that we know, but also have him be suited for this role you have given him.

Wonderful job on this story so far! I love the fact that you used Ray Palmer as the Bishop, Ray is such a sweet guy it makes sense that he would do something like that for Henry. I'm curious who will play each of the other roles in the story. Can't wait to see where you take this...