Awesome i love some good sonamy

Pobre Shadow... no puedes escribir un final alternativo para el?

Jeje es que me gusta el Shadamy

Me gusta su hudtoria, pero deberias ocortar o avizarcuando cambia de escena por que confunde en la lectura.

Dam, those are some real good writting skills over there, i really like the way you describe the situations, escenarios, and character expressions, i could make a perfecto mental picture of the whole chapter thanks to it, and i really like how natural each dialogue and action felt for each character
that was a really nice chapter

me encanta tu historia; una nueva alternativa a las historias Shadamy por favor continuala pronto que me dejas en intriga XD

Ugh, PLEASE reconsider making Sally into a villain. It's tired, cliche, and most of all, lazy.

This is great. I enjoyed it very much. It's something quite different, but in a good way. I look forward to more:)

Oooh, how interesting! I hope Sonic gets his comeuppance!

So why did Sonic lied to her? What will happen next?