| Reviews for Till Kingdom Come |
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Midnight49 chapter 1 . 12/27/2017 WHY No chapter 2 This seems like a great start for a story like this! |
Diggin chapter 1 . 6/12/2017 There are not a lot of Fate Fairytail crossovers and I think this has potential. Breaking it down a bit the start is fine though the scene with Archer and the gods needs some work. But both Archer and Erza are very much OOC giving this somewhat of a strange feel. Given that Archer is very powerful even without Counter Guardian status the talk of power seems strange and the way he is perceived by the other characters makes it seem like you de aged him though I don't see any mention of it. |
Guts the Man88 chapter 1 . 11/13/2016 Good story so far plz update soon |
Holix chapter 1 . 9/28/2016 Would have to say I enjoyed reading this; him being called faker would not have bothered him; even so he proved that Erza was a fake since she did not kill the boar and the villagers gave her that title of hero without truly earning it (in her eyes, of course). |
Xearthes chapter 1 . 9/19/2016 Shirou is whipped wherever he goes... must be E-rank luck. Or EX-rank luck, if you look at it from another perspective ;p |
crz chapter 1 . 9/17/2016 Good story... I dont care about archer personality And plz dont make it harem |
Neema Amiry chapter 1 . 9/17/2016 I Want more, I'm loving this |
10Soah86 chapter 1 . 9/17/2016 Ok, normally I'm not one to be too picky about certain things regarding Fate/ but dang dude Archer is so OOC here, Erza too for that matter. You've got good grammar, which is why I'm even bothering to review instead of just pressing back and reading something else. If you were trying to keep him in character, he wouldn't get so pissed he'd have to cool down after being called a "Faker." Neither him nor Shirou care when called Faker by Gilgamesh, in fact they accept that title wholeheartedly. "There's nothing that says a fake can't beat the original." You might want to put a warning in your summary that the characters are OOC, it's a big turn off for some people. Finally I just want to correct a spelling error, its spelled "Alaya" not "Aaliyah." |
warrior of six blades chapter 1 . 9/16/2016 Damn, I have to say Archer's little Loophole was an interesting way to get him to Earthland. yet, I really am happy to see how Archer said his 'goodbye' to his past idiot self, his little sister Illya, Saber, his King/Master Rin, and even Sakura. It was a touching goodbye from him, even though he wouldn't say those words right in front of them. Plus I like how Archer unintentionally got himself involved with Erza's mission and I'm impressed with his self restraint when Erza got in his face. Talking him down like some greenhorn when in truth he could've let the pressure of his magic loose in an instant to make it clear he was a force to be reckoned with and not some helpless child. I admit I would've been severely tempted to do just that if she mistook me as some glory and fame seeking idiot. I hate people like that for one and two, I only fight to defend myself, the innocent, my allies, and those precious to me. Still I liked how Archer finally got in her face about how he was only there fighting that beast to bring a smile to those people's faces again. While also making her feel just how powerful he was and easily took down the beast without causing excessive damage to the area. A accomplishment considering he was working with Erza and anyone from Fairy tail are known for collateral damage. Though Archer is gonna learn he has one heck of a woman on his hands to deal with now in Erza. One that is seriously gonna give him a run for his money in a lot of ways, but once she tastes a Strawberry cake made by Archer...She might either make him marry her on the spot, rather Archer is willing or not being the question, or out right bargain/blackmail him into her personal cook for all the strawberry cakes she can eat for life! |
98kazer chapter 1 . 9/16/2016 please take the romance slow, it would ruin the story too much, please don't make archer too overpowered, let him have his struggles in fights, let him have some equals, especially in fairy tail, and don't make him more powerful than the master, OP characters ruin many good stories, and also don't rush plot developments, take your time, make some relaxing chapters for archer with some subtle and minor character development or fun and crazy chapters, and finally... DON'T DO A HAREM ROUTE! there are characters that are fit for having a harem and still have a great story, Archer is not one of them, He may have been Emiya Shirou before, but He is now Archer, and Archer Harem disaster, they don't mix. oh and good fanfic, I look forward to your future chapters of this |
Im a guest chapter 1 . 9/16/2016 here from her in summary |