this is the best story... please don't leave us hanging. we need more

oh my gosh! CRIES ive been reading this for a while it is absolutely my favorite and... AND! i cant believe this unexpected turn of events AAAAAAaaa It's so sad though T_T i'm really loving how this story is going! Poor Law... He needs a hug!
Wonderful writing you got there! I'm looking forward to see how things will go with these two. (and what evil plans you got for this story to torture us XD )

Me again, I have just finished the last chapter. It was getting darker and darker, also really tense, I must say. Some details almost gave me a start, especially the last piece, I hold my breath because of its rapid rhymth.

So here is the point where "Tomorrow" and "Murder" will meet? Many secrets are being hidden, if Kid lost his memory, then no one would know what had happened. Although you dropped a few hints, it's just enough to guess around. Do you plan to write a chapter or two in Kid's POV? because I want to know so badly.

Hey, is everything okay now? Sorry for having disappeared so long, I needed to do some serious projects and a, like super super duper important test, which decided my school fee. I passed, luckily, it was the only chance to decrease my school fee to the point ten time smaller.

I haven't read the chapter yet, my fault, just saw your description and well, don't feel guilty because of the late update, you are not that late. And you still keep up your excellent work. No need to update soon if you are busy, and I hope you are better now

I I found this fic today and I was surprised.

I liked it a lot and the suspense created caught my attention, for a moment I feared for Law but the victim was Lady Welma.
Poor woman, what was happening to make her to take such an drastic attitude.

As I said before I liked this fic a lot and will be waiting for updates.

Omg, OMG, OH MY GOOOOD T.T I never expected it to be happened ... She ... I thought she wanted to kill Law, but she committed suicide? OMG, my heart beats fast and fast during reading this chapter T.T Law must be to shocked too much ...

So sorry, seem like I didn't comment on last chapter, I don't know why that happened T.T

Well, onto this piece here. I guess Kid told Welma something about his feeling toward Law right? I have a little hope that when she told him "We had sex in here" just to test Law. It felt terribly wrong with her sentence, in many way. And I just don't believe Kidwas really into her. Welma was SO creepy, like a mad woman, I will admit I'm scared of her. A bit.

Aw, I think Law didn't have a big strong feeling like love, but maybe he had a small crush on Kid, and just didn't realize.

The atmosphere in your fic is somehow dark, it made me have goosebumps... Next month oh my god how can I wait that long? :(

I'm looking forward to the next chapter!
On a sidenote, I'd recommend not writing how the story will end as you did in the beginning of chpater 1. It's a bit of a self-spoiler.

Eh, interesting. I wonder just how much this'll be like "Tomorrow". Writing is good!

I scared my family from the scream I let out omgggg I'm so happy you updated! the title tho is so interesting... I swear this was too sweet Kid is just so sweet that moment when he hugged law from behind and they just, laughed.. *cries* AND THAT ONE where they have the same notebook and they both actually loved that notebook despite its plain look? I HAD to write you a review hoping your day was made bc you made my whole WEEK I must thank you... waiting to see what you'll do next with it! this will be my fave fic I can sense it (it already is duh) great luckhave fun making us cry

I had such a hell of day, I nearly shut down the moment I slumped, heavily, face first, onto my bed. However, I just had to check mail to see if I missed important or not. Then I saw Fanfiction announced that you posted a story. It is as awesome as always and it makes my day, really.

I feel like shooing all my stress away and starting to translate Murder right now. You kind of remind me how much I miss our boys. It's been a long time since the last time I translated fanfic. Thank you, and love you so much.