My gosh please write another chapter!? Like a whole story on this! It's amazing!

Wow how powerful can't wait for ur next story xx

Wow, this is fantastic. I love the way you had moments of Ethan's past slotted in with the present, it worked really well. Loved the brotherly love at the end!

Oh that ending was such a relief after a very sad story. You brought Ethan's misery and suffering to life there but the final part had that message of hope that I always like at the end of stories like this.

This is so amazing. It really is so good. It's beautifully-written and so full of emotion. I was so worried all the way through about what Ethan was going to do as his day got worse. I was so glad when he didn't try to kill himself - and I loved his reason why.

Awww loved it. Great job xx