That was an utterly marvelous story. I really enjoyed it. Maybe the best Kirk and Uhura take I've ever read. You handled every single character fantastically.

Well done!

Good stuff. I like that you took a deep dive into the essential psychological of the characters.

More Kirk/Uhura maybe on shore leave?

He sounds like Roarke from Fantasy Island.

I really enjoy the concept of what everyone feels and McCoy handling the 'group therapy'. The show did episodic TV and not character shows. Too bad.

My favorite stories are the TOS Kirk/Uhura pairings, but they are few and far between. You did a very nice job showing that it is more than just a sexual attraction between them and that they truly love one another. Thank you for this wonderful story.

lovely

LOVELY story. I really enjoyed it!

OH, NO! I did not like this story at all, in the TOS Uhura was the only one Spock played the vulcan harp with, she was the only one who let Uhura tease affectionately. Roddenberry wanted them together by the end of the 3rd season or 4th. There were open attraction by Chapel, OK, but Uhura had the goods and brains. I am happy that that paired Uhura with Spock. I don't want Chapel to be the underdog but I tried many times to see her with Spock but couldn't. But hay, nice thought in the dialog and structure.

good story

This chapter is so romantic in it's visual really wish it was an episode in the original series.

Love it

Wonderful! What an enjoyable and satisfying turn of events and resolution to that episode.

I wish we could go back in time and amend that episode, yours is a much more satisfactory ending. The characterizations and dialogue are excellent, and very true to the characters themselves. I was so looking forward to a Spock/Chapel storyline with the new Star Trek, because they deserved so much more.

This chapter made my heart do a happy dance. I love Kirk and matching him with Uhura is a secret vice of mine. Thanks for sharing such a good story with lots of nice characterizations!