Dang, what a cliff hanger! I'm sad this hasn't updated in forever I would love to find out where you were going to take this story. It had a very interesting premise and I quite enjoyed the way you wrote the characters. Keep up the good work! I hope someday I'll get an update notification for this fic. :)

I really hope you can continue this story. I love it so much.. thank u..

Oh how I wish that there was more of this! I love this fanfic soo much, your such a well written author compared to some, especially when it comes to time travel fics, some people just rush it to much and ruin it, but you know how to balance it well and keep the story going. Thank you for your amazing work, and I hope you update again soon!

Need more!

I don’t know if you are going to update this story or not but I would like to tell you I love it. I would like to know what is going to happen next. I am hoping that you are going to update but it is all up to you if you have the muse for this story still or if it left you. I would love to read more of what is going to happen.

I know its been a year but I hope you haven't abandoned this story - its getting so good! I need to know what happens!

Thank you for this fic. It's amazing! It been years since i watched the anime and this bring back so much fond memories (both the good and sad ones). Thank you! I hope you continue writing. You're doing great!

This story is really good! Keep up the good work! You are doing awesome!

Wow great story!
So sad, that you apparently don't update anymore.

Updates?

I feel like asking if someone is a spy is the kind of thing you're supposed to do BEFORE you illegally draft them.

Hi, I love this story. I especially love the sort of sarcastic/funny tone of it and that while Kira is a good guy and the main character, everyone around him hasn't been turned into damsels/dudes in distress. Hope you write more.

Loved it! Can't wait for more! Please update soon!

Not a fan of the A and K paring, so if you can keep that clinical...
Thanks.

The Agni is mounted on its backpack via a carry arm, that actually supports that canon when its used to fire on a target.
That gun is too heavy for the Atrike to carry it in its hands alone.
This thus needs a rewrite.

Also, would combining the Sword and Launcher pack not be easier to pull off?

As for the Blitz, it contains its cloaking particles with the same field that the Forbidden uses to contain its shielding particles.
In theory, both units have the basic containment system already, its just gass spreaders that need to be a little more diverse.

VSP or Variable Phase Shift Armor is something I can see Kira remembering.
And not good with programming?
Athrun being better?
Who of the two, rewrote a MS OS inside two minutes, during combat and who needed a full tech crew and a minimum of one hour for ths same thing?

Sorry, but Kira is better.
Rather say that Athrun is better in thinking up new computer programs that can think for themself, while Kira is great in modifying existing programs into something better.
Make a better destiction between their programming skills, like Athrun being the better AI programmer, but needing way more time for this, while Kira is more a freeform programmer, doing it all on the fly.
Afteral, who wrote the OS normal humans could use?
Kira.
But Athrun created Birdy and the Haros.
So make it that Athrun is better in creating self learning computer programs, thats a programming focus.