Hope you add more

Sad but good chapter

A good RWBY fic is so rare it feels like. All your stories are so fuckin top

I'm actually curious too see a new chapter of this. I really like your other story and was curious to see what else you had done. It's not as well written but that is to be expected from something you wrote a while ago less practice and all that jazz. But yeah as I said would love to see a chapter 3.

my guess is when your capable of doing so Yang

I approve. This is a cool fic. When will the next update come?

I like it. You write pretty well. Only thing I think you can improve you will probably do in later chapters. This was just setup.

Great chapter I can't wait for the next one, well written so far with good development of Team BLNK with their individual characters and their personalities.

But of a Mary Sue character moment going on right now, but I still want to see how everything happens drom here. Great chapter!

I love it! Whens the next chapter?

Man, why didn't you tell me you started writing this?! I'm so excited, this is going to be so good! This is why you're my favorite! You've got the good stuff!

Holy crap, this is freaking awesome. Excellent dialogue, descriptive details, and sentence structure. You did a fantastic job at developing each, and every member of Team BLNK in the short period from their introduction to their exit. And, not one of them were insanely overpowered, or unreasonably edgy. The only problem I could spot was that you misspelled Glynda's name as "Glenda". Nice work; I can't wait to see more of this story.

Yes. Just yes. This is the best written story I have ever read, even though it's only one chapter.

Blackthorn paired with Winter