please another chapter .

Please update! *cries in the corner* This is so good

I love this story! The characters and their interactions with each other are both hilarious and believable. I’m really looking forward to what happens next.

Also, just out of curiosity, will Martha appear in this story? She’s one of my favorite characters, mainly because she’s very wise and loving, yet doesn’t hesitate to tease and scold others, particularly her foster children, who are all powerless to do anything about it. The scenes where she gets Jack to kneel and kiss her hand and tells Yusei to rescue his future wife right in front of Akiza’s father will forever be two of my favorites. I’m sure she’ll have a lot to say about Jack’s attempt to get back together with Carly and Yusei’s budding relationship with Akiza.

This sounds really good. Please continue. Yusei and Aki forever.

This is pretty good and funny.. question though will the twins be mentioned?

Hideo now approves of the relationship. So Yusei and Aki could finally make love, which were they were holding off on...I hope it happens soon. I sure you will have Crow pushing him to get it on with her already...or so "FINALLY!" when it goes happen.

And will Jack and Carly make up too...

Also hope you do have Yusei and Akiza (Aki. Hate her english name.) end having a kid at some point in the story.

UPDATE SOON!

Omg love it! Im on the edge of my seat awaiting the next chapter ... will crows dearh wish come full circle? Will Carly and jack make up?... spicyness for yusei? Oh how the questions remain cant wait 3

Love the start hope you can update more!

Great chapter! I loved the humor when the boys interact.

Its nice u gave carly some personality, unlike the anime- where she was literally a jack atlas fangirl.

Also, i love the interaction between Yusei Fudo 44 and Yusei, its a nice and unique feature to add.

Anyway, keep up the great work!

I love Crow endless taunts on Yusei over his relationship with Akiza. And it's clearly just to get under his skin and annoy him. Unless you plan to make Crow a rival. As they think it's going to take forever for him to get laid. Especially when he wants to "ask her father" as more of an excuse due to his commitment issues.

I really hope Yusei can get over it. And I know he will. They were so close last time. And I am sure they won't be able to restrain themselves next time.

PLEASE UPDATE SOON!

Omg lol crow gonna get hus ass kicked Lol and yusei gonna just ignore the fact that he screwed her brfore he asked to datr her? Haha my kinda story already pleasr do keep going

I LOVE this story! It's absolute torture...Yusei and Aki were so close. I can't wait for when they start getting intimate. Imagine if their phones started ringing as their in the middle of doing it. I would laugh a bit. I really hope things get romantic between them in future chapters. Though they would be more into each other than anything else. I hope it's a great night of passion without any interruptions.

PLEASE UPDATE SOON! Can't wait to read more!

Great chapter. Yusei and akiza where so close! Annoying phones

Oooh I love it, moar moar MOAR! 3 3

Love this story so far lol poor crow and jacks response to yusei and akiza dancing is hilarious please continue soon