Reviews for A Magical Jinchuuriki
SabannaLea chapter 2 . 10/7/2019
Love it! Could you make Harry good at potions please?
MM995 chapter 1 . 8/8/2019
Honestly, as definitively interesting as it is overall, there are some things I have to disagree with.

One, Minato was 23-24 when he became Homage and 24 when Naruto was born. It seems a bit much to put him at 30 before Naruto's birth.

Second, that Blood Oath thing. Again, it seems a bit much and implausible since they're ninja with Justus, not wizards with magic.

Third, the Hiraishin having yellow light. I mean, seriously, yellow in Yellow Flash is a reference to his hair and speed, not an actual yellow flash. I don't get how people think that making it flash yellow when teleporting makes it cooler; it just throws away stealth out the window.

Still, I'mm looking forward to the next chapter.
Dylan-A-Friend chapter 2 . 8/8/2019
NICE!
TimothyB chapter 2 . 8/8/2019
I like the story but I don't understand why Dumbledore didn't mention he dropped off Harry on the doorstep and how Minato just accepted the fact that he knew where they were located even though there is a veil hiding them. They just accepted it very easily for being ninja.
Rebmul chapter 2 . 8/7/2019
I hope orochi stays good and im hoping for kurenai or anko mostly kurenai or maby both
SkylerHollow chapter 2 . 8/7/2019
Very interesting story idea. One main thing that has not been pointed to one way or another yet is, will Orochimaru betray the village? So far the way you have written him he seems a lot more mellow and less pedo/science fanatic. Honestly think that would be nice and cool since I don't think Harry needs TWO snake megalomaniacal crazies after him. Though if he does go bad I could see how that would be a very interesting story.
dingo-822 chapter 2 . 8/7/2019
Is Orochimaru goi g to be good, please let him be I would love to see his reaction to Voldemort,
Dzerx chapter 2 . 8/7/2019
Huh... Anyone notice that Dumbledore didnt give any mention of the Potter Vaut? Hope Harry asks for an inheritance test at Gringotts.
frankieu chapter 2 . 8/7/2019
nice chapter thx for writing it
hope your harri will be strong and sneaky when he deals with his enemies
but also not hide his power's
Sakura Lisel chapter 2 . 8/7/2019
Hmmm... does the old coot realize who Hari Namekaze is? Why else would he have sent Fawkes to deliver the letter instead of giving up when the owls failed to deliver the invite and give Hari up as a lost cause as a possible future student? *lol* though if he DOES realize who Hari is, why didn't he bring it up during the talk while explaining everything else? Plus which name was on Haris invite letter? The new one or the old one?
Lazymanjones96 chapter 2 . 8/7/2019
Interesting stuff looking forward to more
Umbra.Venator chapter 1 . 12/20/2016
Good chapter and have a happy holiday season :)
Dzerx chapter 1 . 10/12/2016
Great chapter! Hope Kushina and Minato survive. Was Minato able to remove the Horcrux from Harry?
I'm Neopolitan chapter 1 . 9/24/2016
Th8s story actually has potential, and I like that. Keep going!
Rebmul chapter 1 . 9/14/2016
I'm hoping he has a great relation ship with matabi maybe even make her the pairing this is interesting and I hope that minato and kushina don't die
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