This is so wonderful. You touched into each of their lives just enough with each scene and I think it's the perfect length (even though my fangirl heart does want more). You've done a great job characterizing them in such a short story and the pain that they've had to live with is palpable. Fantastic job.

WOW. It was glorious! Some post in tumblr (maybe it was yours...?) included this fanfic, and while I've never been too much of a fan of Kunzite/Venus - never stopped to think about them, nor had enough canon material to enjoy - with this fic I could really feel their love story from the beginning.
Thank you very much!

i do really really love kunzite x venus pairing.. and love what you did!.. pleasee make the another story about them.. it's great you made it in two different point of view.. venus and kunzite.. i do love to see another please. 0

Great job of meshing everything together. It came out really well

omg i love this. this is everything i could ever want in a minako/kunitze fic. thirteen year old me is squealing. they were my favorite sailor moon ship. i love them so much and you reminded me why.

your writing is so beautiful. i felt like i was under their skin and feeling everything as they struggled with their memories. i loved the relief they felt when they found each other again.

i need more from you.

i beg you to give me another chapter, this is not enough,i want wedding bell

Another great chapter, you capture the characters so well
I'd love to read something about their new life together next. :)

I'd love to read the one shoots continuation of this story!

These were really really good! I love it! I liked the way you wrote it too, it added so much to the story. Thanks!

Another great chapter, you capture the characters so well
I'd love to read something about their new life together next. :)

i beg you to give me another chapter, this is not enough,i want wedding bell

I agree that he must have had some sort of friendship with Serenity. I don't see how anyone could not be her friend. :)

Another great chapter. A quick and delightful read.

I really liked this! I like your format, and I liked the pace. Good job!

You really need to proofread but I love this!

Plz write more!i love this so much!