when is the updated T_T?

Please continue this good story

T_T they suffer so much T_T_T_T_T_T_T_T
I'm glad there's still some hope for the couple but...so angsty. Hopefully, Tsubasa suffers (cause we know she's still going to suffer) only a little, like only her knee and her shoulder is more than enough.
Anyways please keep up the hard work!

why oh why did you do that cliffhanger ending, but I did enjoy the moments between Honoka and Tsubasa even though it wasn't the best circumstance

I’ve been waiting for so long

shit... damn it

I gotta say for a fandom I'm not usually in this has been a treat to read and I'm looking forward to the ending, plus the undercover plot I kind of saw coming sorry to say but still good job

Esto es más de lo que puedo manejar, ver a mi hermosa Honoka sufriendo de esa manera me mata. Aún cuando do sepa que Tsubasa lo hace por un motivo, es doloroso.

Debo haber gritado con cada palabra o quizás solo es que mi cara se lleno de llanto, solo tengo el dolor en el corazón y me encantaría poder hacer una enorme carta contándole sobre todo lo que sus escritos producen en mí.

Como siempre esperaré la actualización y aunque llegó tarde a verla, sé que la leeré con la esperanza de ver que todo se resuelva en algún punto. Por favor sea gentil conmigo y mi hermoso TsubaHonk.

I can't properly writeeeee, sooo gooood!
I feel bad for Tsubasa, can you give her and Honoka a break? Just a small one?
God I wish I knew what's going to happen next so I don't become a mess like rn.
Anyways a good chapter like always! :)

Oh por los Dioses! Me alegra no haberme equivocado con Tsubasa. Sabía que ella amaba demasiado a Honoka para lastimarla sin razón. Sólo que las cosas son demasiado complicadas para las dos ahora, aunque Honoka perdonaría todo de Tsubasa, espero que así sea.

Me preocupa que Tsubasa no vaya a salir viva de todo esto, se está poniendo la soga al cuello y empujando el banco para caer y ahorcarse. Tengo tantos nervios por saber cómo sigue.

Mi tonto correo no me había enviado la notificación de actualización y sino entro a depurar no me doy cuenta. Estaré más al pendiente porque me perdí dos capítulos.

Amo el TsubaHonk y la manera en que lo manejas tan magistral. Eres el mejor representante de esta hermosa pareja. Mi OTP, la única. Gracias por la historia y seguimos en espera del siguiente capítulo. Buena suerte en todo!

First things first! I'm glad you're okay! Oh my gods, the roads are getting more and more dangerous these days. I've witnessed a bunch of vehicles just zooming pass even though the traffic light is for pedestrians to cross already and what not. So... I'm glad to hear you're okay. Do take care! This world will suffer a huge loss if anything happened to you. (I will lose the best TsubaHono writer I've encountered!)

And...I realized I didn't reply to your reply in AO3 even though I wanted to! OAO So, I'll do it here. :)

Mm~ let's see~ I usually hang out in more. And stalk around AO3 just to see if there's new stories shared, and well, with a stroke of luck, I saw your new chapter there and couldn't control myself to pounce for the read! *O* (This time I managed to, and also because you shared it here much faster. Hehe~ :'3)

Chapter 9's potent last line. You mentioned that you were inspired by "a comment someone made on a songwriter's lyrics-writing technique and applied a similar technique to come up with it." I got curious, hehe. What's this lyrics-writing technique? OvO (I always want to know how another writer thinks, or is inspired~ makes me understand how you can write spectacularly after all~ *v*)

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Now! For this chapter! *o* We're on Tsubasa's side of the story now! And just had to put Tsubasa in such a...crazy, hurtful, life-threatening mission! I mean, Tsubasa herself accepted it, but..! OAO (Does this mean that Tsubasa's acting begun from pretending to be a horrible drunk? That hurts a lot.. for Honoka.. And herself..!)
I know Tsubasa is doing this for the police, for justice..but the hurt inflicted on Honoka is just so much that I'm so torn between...wanting Tsubasa to spill the beans to Honoka, hug her and tell her everything or Tsubasa holding strong and completing her mission.
(I swear, even if says she'll explain it to Honoka after all this is over. The hurt is already done! And what are they betting on? Honoka's benevolence or undying love for Tsubasa? So that after this whole mission ends, all will be resolved so simply as just telling the truth? That seems so.. unfair? Though I can see Honoka being that forgiving/understanding, and she IS very in love with Tsubasa still after all. Of course, I bet Honoka will learn along the way of what Tsubasa is doing; Tsubasa is an excellent actress, but Honoka is a great inspector too.)

That aside? I love the opening to this chapter. You're back to writing in your element, and I'm more than ecstatic to read fluff TsubaHono! *O* To me, Tsubasa fell in love at first sight. Hehe. :'P Honoka really has a certain charm though. :'P (I can't even explain it.)

["Shure. Pweash shit."] This line cracked me up. And the part where Tsubasa had to take a double take cos' Honoka was upset about not getting the aircon, not about missing the talk by Kira Tsu-something! Hahas! XD

It hurts that Tsubasa will have to be alone for a time, so if I want more of those fluffy memories, it also means "waking up" to Tsubasa missing Honoka badly. (I'll still take it if there is!) I would think that if we were on Honoka's side we could get some fluffy memories too, but then I remember that these days, Honoka is laden with nightmares, traumatized (?) by Tsubasa leaving her...

Mm.. You don't know how glad I was that Seira was the one to kill the man who took Tsubasa's finger and got her crippled. Thank god for her obsession with cleanliness! (I wonder how this quirk will be used against her.)

And well. What's on my mind and concerning me the most now is why Saint Snow/Blue men is after Honoka. Does Tsubasa and/or the police know? And Phase B... I'm worried, but I also want to know what Tsuabsa is going to have to do..!

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Mm, regarding your end notes. *o* I'm jumping in my seat to see how this whole things plays out. How will they take down Saint Snow? How will Tsubasa and Honoka be after all the events? I pray for Tsubasa's physical wellness, and Honoka's mental/heart health. x

I hope your next multi chap story for TsubaHono is a fluffy one? :'P Like maybe you want to write more for the university one too. Hehe~ *O*

Anyways! Awesome, awesome chapter! I can't wait for more~ *w* But take care, stay safe, be happy and keep loving TsubaHono~ X'D hehe~

I knew Tsubasa was there! :')
Great development of character btw.
Can I guess what Tsubasa is planning? She's planning on taking the whole organization down from the top, so she'll become close with Seira and Ria and then turn them down? (and depending on how long you're planning to make this series) before she can make it the police finds them and Honoka is disappointed on her. And finally for x reason everything works out 'cause this is not (?) an angsty fic :))))
Thanks for the chapter!

Estoy con los sentimientos encontrados, ver a esta Tsubasa en plan de mala y me vale madre todo el mundo y me los voy a echar, es bastante duro. Aunque mi corazón romántico cree que ese encuentro con Honoka solo fue una fachada para verla de nuevo. Siendo que era su cumpleaños, Tsubasa no iba a dejar pasarlo así de fácil. En el fondo se que sigue amando a Honoka pero están tan lastimada una y otra que por el momento no pueden estar juntas.

Sé que Honoka perdonara todo al final porque ella ama demasiado a Tsuba y de que Tsubasa a pesar de todo siempre estará pensando en el bienestar de Honoka. Sé que es así, me quiero aferrarse a esa idea.

Como siempre muchas gracias por traer está hermosa y conmovedora historia que le encanta leer y disfrutar. Se agradece la actualización pronta, eso fue una gran alegría.

Honoka… She's suffering so much T_T, please don't get me wrong stories are interesting if a character suffers from time to time, but this…
Anyways I finally catch up so I'm glad! Also you're extremely skilled with words and not many people can play with them as you do, I hope you're proud of yourself!
I feel like the next chapter will be just like this one they find Tsubasa and she's friendly and all but no one can trust her, and so Honoka will suffer but her friends'll be there :D
Thank you for your story and I hope you're doing better irl

Why is actually Honoka always the one who is hurt? I love Honoka and Tsubasa but someone should give Tsubasa an inner wake-up call!
It is best to see a third person, who kaes out with Honoka before Tsubasa's eyes and Tsubasa becomes jealous. Or something like that. Something that shows Tsubasa's feelings for Honoka. This FF breaks every time my TsubaHono heart. BUT I found it good that Honoka could tear herself together and remained steadfast. I like it when she shows her strong side. Even if she actually breaks down inside. But that she does not show her pain before Tsubasa. I like that.