there's such a strange jump in writing styles between these and the first, it makes me wonder if someone else wrote the first one, or if it simply was written at a much later time.

Hey Silver Sentinel, I read the chapter and it is AMAZING! But I think I might have found a spelling error. I could be wrong and will make a fool of myself but I just wanted to let you know, Here is the sentence. The syringe was knocked out of his hand as it when flying across the floor. I don't know if I'm reading it wrong but you can see for yourself, Just wanted to let you know. Sorry!

woah that was a long chapter, but it was so worth it!

OOOOOHHHHHH, It's getting intense, they have awoken a beast, a beast that shouldn't have been awaken!

You are really talented, I wont leave a review on each of the chapters but they are amazing!

OMG, THAT STORY WAS AMAZING, IM READING MORE, YOURBOTH SO AMZING!

oh crud Splinter heard.

Gosh! I think I never, in my short turtle-fan-life seen/read Donnie so upset. WHAT IS WRONG WITH YOU DONATELLO, SNAP OUT OF IT! (exiting)

Thanks for writing such a wonderful story. :)

Fantastic story.

Awwwww, this was such a bittersweet ending to a great story. Half of me is completely crushed because I adore Leatherhead, but the other half is jumping for joy because Donnie is embracing the second chance he has been given. It's good to see character growth here and to see that our favorite genius has learned from what has come to pass.

This story was wonderful. So many dramatic twists and turns! The suspense and angst were glorious and kept us on the edge of our seats week after week. You all did a fabulous job. Thank you for sharing this story with us. I loved it.

Oh, and congratulations on your nomination. You definitely deserved it. Bishop was a real creep in this story. Bravo!

really sad that leatherhead died in this but the ending was good otherwise

Arrrrr! Arrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrr! I just... I can't even... Arrrrr! OMG OMG OMG OMG! Leatherhead... NO!
I need a minute... I can't function. I didn't see that coming... And somethings tells me LH isn't a clone. Oh god. How can I be so thrilled and yet so sad at the same time? I will try to review again late. I need to go cry in a corner now. But I will leave you with the word 'epic'

Let us have a moment of silence for the brave old croc. He went out doing what he had to do.

Been a wild ride of story, from start to finish. Enjoyed this very much. Congrats also on the nomination. Is quite deserved.

WHAAAAAAT? YOU KILL LEATHERHEAD? That was sooooo saaaad how could you? You could find another way, he didn't deserve to die, that was completely unfair :'(
On the other side, I'm glad that Donnie finally came back home and specially when he accepted he was a ninja and a scientist too, that was so nice.
It's sad to see this story over, but it was a pretty good story