Probably one of your best stories I have ever read.

I even loved seeing Lincoln and Luna together in this fanfic, because I do love seeing bonding Lincoln and Luna together.

Hey Afallon nobody gives a shit on what you said metal horny here isn’t a garbage writer and praising his asshole writing is like worshipping his Gary Stu oc who will never be likeable. I’m amazed people are beyond stupid to enjoy such garbage story. I use to think Luna and Lincoln had a bond but overtime I realize now their bond is like ketchup mixed with crackers disgusting and vile that shouldn’t even be a good outcome. You call me a coward but your just a sad little pussy who wants to insult someone who wants to give criticism to this dumbass writer. That really shows your blind enough to praise such a pathetic story I don’t understand how this moron thinks watching Lincoln impale Ronnie Anne is a good idea. When murder isn’t a joke you dick face.

Do me a favor and fuck of and I ain’t listening to your dipshit insults your no better than Matt and he a politic loving maniac who won’t shut the fuck up on Donald trump and the loud family meeting the president. Your better off eating those words to make yourself seem more ugly than those choice of words and metalbrony fuck you. You can go to the nearest hole and perish because your just a Ronnie Anne hating dirtbag who a racist to all Latin Americans your the real life Eric Cartman.

The funny part as well Guest, is that reviews made by guests can be deleted. So your attempt of a baby tantrum is even more pointless.

Good lord Guest. Do you even read what you wrote? Only teenagers write such long-winded rants that seem to try to cram in as much insults as possible. The sheer pretentious is baffling. All the while, the fact you wrote it as a guest only proves that you are a pathetic coward that hides behind anonymity. Spew whatever hot air you have, it's as insignificant just like you.

What is even your deal so first you made a hate group. But yet you claim you didn’t create it. Funny when their evidence you did create stop lying don’t fuck with me you dipshit and this isn’t coming from a moronic asshole like you who claims you like Ronnie Anne character in general when you have at least one or two drawings of Lincoln making Ronnie Anne don’t think I was born yesterday to witness the actions you done. You refuse to take criticism even stating to others you are like the simpsons and family guy writer. That isn’t a excuse for making racist jokes in your fan fictions you sick bastard! Why won’t you ever learn you can’t always please others. The internet is a place of criticism whether or not it hate or constructive you need to take it and learn from your mistakes when clearly you did the opposite. Your writing skills is breadwinners level of shit because you continue making stories with no real morals and Vector was right you are trash and always will be. Im sensitive my ass your also a weirdo who has a obsession over Luna and Lincoln being close sisters when Luna isn’t even the guardian to Lincoln to begin with. She just a faker who uses that title to get what she wants and Luna is a overrated bitch that does a stupid accent makes her as racist as you. Overall this fanfiction is no better than your Rude Liar aka rogue lion fanfiction. You will get hate no matter what. Next time when you ask for a commission I do not want to see another racist hate art of you against Ronnie Anne culture so in conclusion your a ignorant bitch who can’t take criticism quit denying it and learn to improve of course I dont believe anything you do you make bad stories no matter how hard you try. Makes me sick you only do the stories because one person who can’t leave reviews has no idea how your a scumbag and racist prick in general. Luna and Lincoln will never be close fuck that and you suck at writing Lincoln character instead of a nice kind Lincoln he has the deadly sin of wrath and pride who exactly like you. Oh well for you the trash never stops to smell no matter how much perfume you use to make the shit smell from smelling good.

i just started reading fanfiction and im so glad i came across this, i agree with lincoln and luna have a stronger relationship out of the loud house family, i loved this fanfiction you wrote, ill definitely favourite this and you, and i cant wait to read the sequel since ive just finished reading this. great job this is absolutely amazing.

No matter how many times I read this, it still warms my heart!

I love you married me

A WEREWOLF?!

Oh no.

Oh god..i got a bad feeling about this.

Typical lucy xD

Something bad is gonna happen..

您寫得真好 VEAR VEAR GOOD

Im sorry but the grammar, spelling, and punctuation is throwing me off farther 50 cents ceremonial first pitch. Fix the damn grammar, spelling, And punctuation!