You had me for all of seven chapters, I really tried to like this but I just can't Niro is an ass, and to me it seems like your trying to justify it with things like, 'oh it's his perspective' not to mention the fact that he seems to legit hate humanity and is all around not the kind of person who should be allowed within 50 miles of a school like beacon. In my opinion if he were a person, I would recommend SERIOUS psychotherapy for his serverly warped world view.

I want to like this, I really do but HOLY SHIT the edge. His inner thoughts are pretentious and he acts like he is constantly on a moral high ground.

So... done with this.

Edgelord wannabe protagonist, nonsensical AU elements because 'they look cool', bunch of OCs stacked on top, lack of general direction, pretentious bullshit thrown around every corner ("Look at me! I HAVE IT SO DIFFICULT BECAUSE I'M A PHYSICAL GOD!" [/Niro]).

In short, it's bad. Like a twelve year old's first attempt at writing a character that sounds cool, without taking into account if said character would work in a story.

...Or what a story it's going to be, for that matter.

Edgelord wannabe? Check. Moronic premise? Also check.
Still, every story deserves a chance.

so I've read the whole story now and I can say that j agree

While the first few chapter were interesting to read, the past 15 or so chapters have been a chore to go through. The fic seems to keep on dragging and I'm still confused as to just who your main character is. While you claim that Niro is the one, your content doesn't really support that claim, considering the fact that more than 75% of the material that I've read seems to be about some other RWBY character or OC.
I see no point in reading any further.
Good Day

Nep-fire :P

next time do Arex and Xera. Just like Niro and Nira, they have no possibility or reason of ever meeting each other.

Please remember that Niro still has his goals to achieve. A story should focus on how journey of main character in attaining his goal. That you sidelined him this long... I'm really dissapointed. I started to read your fic because I'm interested in HIS story. His team made for equally interesting characters as well, I admit, but their roles were supposed to support him, not as the main characters instead. Their arcs have taken WAY longer than they were supposed to and unless you return to his story soon, then I'd say you would be better off scrapping the early chapters and replace them with ones that are focused on Arex and Ano because they have become the main characters. (Which I truly hope you would NOT do)

I think you've lost your focus in this story. We didn't even get to see Niro anymore.

i mostly skip through most of this because to me the only interesting parts are with dante and whatever the main character's name is dont remember been soooo long since i have seen any mention of his name.

I want to say Niro is edgy. But you did a really good job making him to cynical as fuck to fall into that generic quality.

The omakes are starting to get a bit more tolerable.

I see my bribe worked. So for a semblance, is it being able to manipulate, change, or absorb energy? Kenetic energy seems to be his favorite, but his partial absorption of the plasma means he can use others. Just perhaps with less efficiency.

Just wish that Niro could be in a relationship with other than ado, because I just don't know what to say about her relationship with ly