So confused, what happened to Rei? Rei saying "I am not her", did Gendo rape her cause she's a clone of Yui or is this some weird Lilith thing?

This fic is really really great! I know on SV you talked about how you felt you'd hit a dead end - but honestly I thought you were doing a fantastic job of balancing the main trio, the other characters, and the second triad that you integrated into the plot pretty flawlessly.

I hope you one day come back to this story!

Loved the story and the dynamics between the characters. Hope you come back and revist it.

Wow, i like this Story so much that i searched and found the long lost login details to this account to leave a rewiew xD.

I really like the world building and character development you have here and bringing the yakuza, charecters outside the mainline NGE manga/anime in the mix was also a nice touch.
With the triad feeling like the only resonable Ship in NGE and now with the plot thickening hoffe ich das es dir gut geht und du etwas Zeit und Lust findest um die Story weiter zuführen beenden :)

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I don't know if you at all plan to continue and finish this fic, but it is something I very much look forward to.

A relationship like that isn't meant to go to waste.

Huh, until now, I had honestly forgotten about the Infantry guy that Misato got on board. Nice to see you planning things out this far.

I am rather impressed. Besides good quality all around, seeing someone managing to actually write the difficult parts of Asuka’s character, and keeping to the meek but variably hidden strengths of Shinji, and the logical, straightlaced aspects of Rei without breaking either eary is quite impressive.

Between that and a fascinating but simple idea ignore changing the order of the Angels, you’ve got a very nice story here.

Angles attacking out of order, is one thing but you skipped, what is perhaps the most important one for the 2nd act of the series. Iruel. It's that one that started the final act afterall. It's with Iruel information that the angles learn about the pilots, Leiel, and Bardiel tried to circumvent the EVA, and went after the pilots themselves and when they failed Zeruel tried to brute force through them.

Eh, you didn't explain what happened to Rei, like you said you would in the authors note, and damn o.0 Bardiel already?

Now if Asuka was lagging behind Rei, and Shinji by a good 2 to 3 minutes to get into Unit 2, how could she also be right next to Shinji and talk to him as Shinji is running along the gantry to be loaded into his entry plug?

I already have had enough of this story. It was rather interesting to see different paths of what could happen in Evangelion but I didn't like this one. I just didn't. One thing I'm strongly against is harem relationships. I felt incredibly sorry for Misato, she should've been the caring guardian she has always been since the anime. Now she's the one groveling for forgiveness for the three, which actually made me emotional for her and I even cried for her, and them showing their relationship off like that just ticks me off. This story just put me in a bad mood for some reason. I'm sorry but that's my review. Its a good story nontheless, I just don't like it. The best one I ever read was called 'Red Tears.' You should check that out. But first read 'Broken' since its the prequel to Red Tears.

I need more, it's so good

Great story sonfar, keep up the good work. Looking forward to the next installment, whenever that may come.

That Mana girl just killed my desire to read on, instantly.

Almost everyone says Asuka/Shinji is toxic but I always felt that if he had held her during their "kiss" like she wanted, then EVERYTHING might have ended better canonicly.