Its interesting so update soon

Update

well now i'm just going to cry all over again(hugs a pillow and start's to cry in it because she feel's bad for robin)but really this was good like REALLY good. I like the changes you made even though the last one was amazing as well,it really make the story more interesting. this is the story the made me want to right my one 'little jay' story one day.

I love it can wait to see what happens next

this is awesome, cant wait for more. (or is that it)?