| Reviews for Dracos astonishing birthday |
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   natt123 chapter 2 . 1/27 Lovely! |
| UnknownSoul-x chapter 2 . 6/25/2019 Nice |
| Pharies chapter 2 . 4/17/2019 Cute! I LOVED the way her dress was described. I want one haha ~Tori |
| catita55555 chapter 2 . 4/1/2019 Aww. I wish there was more. I'm glad to read a veela fic that wasn't 99% angst |
| catita55555 chapter 1 . 4/1/2019 So. Freaking. Hot. |
| Guest chapter 2 . 3/30/2019 ron is such a twit. uggg H }:) |
| Guest chapter 2 . 3/24/2019 I think this is really good for a first fic. The only things that I'd note for the future, are: there were a few times where you put "were" instead of "was", and the end felt a little rushed, but really good overall. |
| Puffindor chapter 2 . 3/12/2019 This is a great fic, with moments of complete hilarity and some cute fluffy moments too! You have some serious talent and I'm gonna check out all your other stories now, thanks! |
| Guest chapter 2 . 3/5/2019 Is it really over? I don’t want it to be over! *pouts* This was AMAZING and sweet and the smut was great! Don’t let negative people get you down because this was really good! I don’t see any grammer issues so whatevs! You do you and write on girl! |
| Shira chapter 2 . 3/4/2019 This is a lovely story! Its fast paced and fun to read! Thanks for sharing! |
| HPforever2018-3 chapter 2 . 3/4/2019 I feel like, I just read a short recap of all Dramoine veela stories with bad grammar. Well, the good news is, grammar can be fixed. Personally I am not really into sex without foreplay. I mean, they kiss and a minute later they are in bed together. However I know a lot of readers just want to read the lemon, and lack of build up is not important to them. A matter of taste. One thing I always wonder about, when reading Draco Veela stories: why does his parents never tell him beforehand? It is always after. No offense, but that is just plain stupid. I know, it is "canon" in Draco Veela stories. One day maybe a writer makes a story not so "canon". Well, something to look forward to. Good luck with your writing! Just because the plot was not to my liking, doesn't mean there was anything wrong with it. Taste differs. |
| pgoodrichboggs chapter 2 . 2/28/2019 Cute. |
| SereniteRose chapter 2 . 2/28/2019 loved all two chapters and I can't wait to read chapter, three, thanks ever so much. |
| roguesc9 chapter 1 . 10/12/2018 Thanks for writing this. |
| Kessymaniak chapter 1 . 2/28/2018 I loved your story, I wished we had more in the end, like how the relationship is evolving and a little bit more about the parents' meeting, etc. but it was a genius idea! |
