Very good

What happened? The first 2 chapters were so good and suddenly the quality of writing changed drastically? Where is this random travel companion and comedy coming from?

Parts of this chapter was just weird that curse bit was just totally uninteresting and you the way you keep adding oc's is irritating

Great chapter and keep writing! I would enjoy if Kael had a Pokemon such as a beldum/Aron. A good steel type that makes him learn different battling strategies and adapt. Thanks for the update!

Please update soon!

So far, it has been interesting. I can definitely see some of the areas which were inspired by my story, but I am happy to see you making it your own.

A couple things that stand out to me: the battles are a little long - due in part to the amount of dodging by the combatants; and the battle between the Hydreigon and Haxorus on the mountain top is lasting an awful long time.

Other than those things and a few typos (which believe me, I know how hard it is to catch them all when you write so much) the story is pretty captivating. I hope you find the motivation and inspiration to continue soon. Good job!

Prefer him to be by himself most of the time in some of the chapters I hate his traveling partners im fine with them meeting up occasionally but for more than a few chapters at a time make me want to backhand them

I am a huge fan of Metal Drogon and i loved your story...
Its a bit slow but i am sure it will get more intense as time goes on.

Great chapter! It was fun to see that Kael had hurt/killed his first human after only hunting Pokemons, great character development.

Haha not disappointed at all! Slow chapters are definitely needed at times. I think it is incredibly important for story building which you are doing great at. I think that's what sets your story apart from others, it has substance rather than just copying the regular flow of the tv series. Great job and can't wait for the next chapter!

I am really enjoying reading your story and thanks for the update! Keep it up!

Great update and story as always. Did seem a lot slower this time around but look forward to seeing what happens next time. Keep up the good work! Hopefully it won't be too long until the next update

I love this story and I hope you update soon!

Pretty nice story, keep updating and many more people will come read this! Keep up the good work.

man Sarah is a bitch plain and simple if I was the mc I would hit that bitch back he shouldn't be so whipped