Me gusta. Espero pronto la continuación. Felicidades

Oh my goodness! This was a riveting read. I can’t wait to for the next chapter. You’re a great writer and I look forward to reading more of your work.

Awesome chapter please continue!

Ahh, the feels! Thank you for this update, and it was great to see Sesshomaru give Kagome that little wrist-kiss promise. _

Progress! Please do ignore all the negative reviews. This is YOUR Kagome and you have a right to write her however you wish. And you're a damn good writer so never doubt yourself. Best wishes and eagerly awaiting the next chapter,

~ArYa~
(Offcial fanfic acct: aryaputra)

This is a very frustrating story so far. You made Kagome weak. All she is doing is crying for someone else to save her friends, instead of using her bow & arrow to at least try and help them her self. Started out good but this is disappointing. Hope it gets better.

Continue please

question, fairly important

is there any chance of Shippo coming back potentially with the wish on the shikon jewel if it was something along the lines of "I wish a happy ending for everyone affected by the jewel" or whatever cause frankly I love that kit and am heartbroken he's gone

Glad to see you are back with a new chapter. Im going back to chapter one and re-read the whole story.

Esta verdaderamente bien. Me gusta bastante y deseo leer más pronto. Te felicito de veras gran historia triste pero bonita y espero con ansias la futura relación, cortejo y apareamiento de nuestro lord con la linda kagome. Todo lo que a pasado la convertirá en alguien más duro. Y seshomaru este será muchas cosas de kagome cuando sepa de su procedencia y porque no está entrenada. Quizás sea más humilde y receptivo a kagome cuando sepa que posiblemente no vivirá para ver el futuro.

wow... I was NOT expecting this turn of events! I saw the "angst" label but didn't expect it to mean that we'd be losing Kohaku and Shippo for good like that! I do love the changes with Sesshomaru, Kagome calling him out and it actually striking home to him and realizing he's got a LOT to learn... and Inuyasha admitting to himself that he loves Kagome but knows that he'd still choose Kikyo over her and knowing that Kagome knows that but also being super jealous of his brother's sudden fascination with Kagome. I wonder what he'd think if he knew what his brother was going through? And for all of this to happen immediately after he joins their crew, no chance to get used to each other's presence, no chance for Sesshomaru to heal and learn from Kagome yet... gah!

I wonder what's going to happen next? What did Sesshomaru think when Inuyasha leapt into the well and vanished in blue light? Did he try to follow and fail? If so why? Will he be able to get through in the future? Will he be sitting at the well most of the time until she returns with Rin coming to check on him and spend time with him? Or will he wait in the village? Hmm...

Oh kami que triste! Porfavor! Actualice pronto! Cuanto drama, amo tu historia.

I hope you update soon I really love the story

I’m very sad for shippou and kohaku but I feel the biggest hypocrite to be Kagome and I don’t like that Sesshomaru is made to feel bad for his father’s decision and the way he is which is infinitely better than inuyasha the 2 timing possessive spoilt brat. I feel frustration more than sadness. More so at the plot and portrayal.

My heart is so incredibly broken, but I can't wait to see what comes next.