Reviews for One Sunny Day
Tetho chapter 3 . 4/14
Heh, Weiss as Tohsaka. I am sure EMIYA will love it.
NoOneImportant chapter 2 . 4/10
Ah there it is the famous “what’s your favourite fairy tail” line
samuelcaldeira76gmail.com chapter 3 . 3/23
Is the author even updating any stories cause I would really like to read more of this please update again if you are still available
Guest chapter 3 . 2/29
You might not know this, but this us on: "The Reason Why You Suck Speech" for crossover fanfictions on TVtropes.
formerlyarandomreviewer chapter 2 . 2/19
Mortal nasuverse sin in this chapter. No World Conscience or less of one would have little to no positive effect on Shirou/Archer's projections. They wouldn't be more real, meaningfully longer lasting, or closer to the original in performance/rank.
The World doesn't degrade their Rank, that stems from Shirou/EMIYA's inherent limitations as a magic user. He simply can't recreate them absolutely perfectly, and so they are lesser.
As for the World breaking them down, Shirou's projections last indefinitely. Or at least so long that he didn't even know they were supposed to fade away. They will last so long as his image of them remains strong. It's why Shirou's projections were inferior to EMIYA's, his image was inferior, the production was inferior, and when EMIYA's started breaking his the undeniable reality clashed with his image and shattered it both literally and metaphorically. If the current World has any effect on his creations and it's not erasing them at a noticeably faster rate EMIYA isn't likely to notice at all. The World might be erasing him slower than what he'd expect, but that's a given as far as he knows because he doesn't have a Master serving as an anchor to the World.
No World is just right out. If that was the case his magecraft wouldn't work at all.
Roland's Blade chapter 2 . 10/7/2019
My main critique so far is that the character's dialogue doesn't match their personality. I don't think I've ever heard Yang say nonsense, nor does it sound like something she'd do. And it's not just Yang, it's everyone else too. Maybe work on witting purely modern (normal) conversations you'd have with your friends to translate into a story?
zangetsulanzadelrelampago chapter 3 . 9/22/2019
I just imagined Liam O'Briens (probably butchered his name) voice while I read this chapter when Archer was breaking RBY (since Wiess is KO) down. It was awesome. I do hope you continue this.
adammflatt chapter 1 . 9/20/2019
Great start, would love to see it continued
Miguel Castro chapter 3 . 6/3/2019
if you update and if theres is a parking make it archer x weiss and lancer if he shows up with blake
Guest chapter 3 . 4/13/2019
por favor continua con esto
XLord of NightmaresX chapter 3 . 4/11/2019
Yang's a bitch, she needs to get bitch slapped to nonexistence
Miguel Castro chapter 3 . 11/24/2018
if your willing to give this for adoption I'll take it I'm a huge fate fan and I have an idea where this can go I have something like this on another account of mine on wattpad and if ur willing I'll continue it
Stoic chapter 3 . 11/10/2018
Sir I say this is gooooolll)dddddddd it's really perfect my god the story the interactions a real perfection and on the side note hope this continues since I despaired when it was updated two years ago
HateReborn27 chapter 3 . 9/30/2018
it was enjoyable to read this story
Dovar chapter 3 . 9/27/2018
i hope this story will be continued its really interesting
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