Reviews for Second Chance
Shadow22739 chapter 9 . 7/11
Awesome! Such a nice way of seeing luffy like that! Great story! Hope it still continues!
Reaperdan81 chapter 4 . 5/20
That’s more like it ,steamrolling enemies
Reaperdan81 chapter 3 . 5/20
Marines are scum indeed ,did shit for years about Morgan’s tyranny,but now a pirate turns up and defeats him and now they want to be good marines,always hated that scene
yuzukikuran476 chapter 9 . 5/2/2019
Man this story is going to be amazing and please update soon.
yuzukikuran476 chapter 8 . 5/2/2019
Hahaha the look on shanks and his crew and Marco and ace and Sabo's faces about Luffy's bounty and to think Luffy facing garp and smoker and luffy how the hell did you forget that garp has Haki? and am glad that Dragon saved luffy and his crew from marines and buggy and Alvida and their crew they must be pain in Luffy and his crew's asses to deal with. Please keep updates coming for this amazing story.
yuzukikuran476 chapter 7 . 5/2/2019
Am surprised that luffy didn't offered Gin and Johnny and Yosaku to join him and his crew and its a good thing that luffy is training his crew about Haki and its funny to see johnny and Yosaku being tied up and seeing a sea king over them. am glad that luffy and his crew beat crap out of Arlong and his crew and Nami's hometown got the first Strawhat's flag for protection which am glad and that rat face marine needs a beating. Please let Nojiko join luffy and his crew mates.
yuzukikuran476 chapter 6 . 5/2/2019
Poor Luffy he's suffering through nightmares about his crew and ace's death and luffy you need to opened up to your crew mates about everything and am glad that Nami going to trust luffy and rest of her crews mates to beat Arlong and his crew. Am surprised that luffy didn't ask Mihawk about shanks contact number.
yuzukikuran476 chapter 5 . 5/2/2019
Luffy and his crew kick kuro and his crew asses and got the going Merry I bet Luffy missed Merry very much. Please keep updating this story.
yuzukikuran476 chapter 4 . 5/2/2019
hahaha Nami you never changed when comes to Money and Gold and this story is going to be an interesting Story and time for me to sing for buggy: begins to sing-
Buggy the red-nosed Pirate
Had a very shiny red nose
And if you ever saw it
You would even say it glows
All of the other Pirates
Used to laugh and call him names
They never let poor Buggy
Join in any Pirates games
Then one foggy night
Shanks and came to say,
"Buggy with your nose so bright
Won’t you join my crew tonight?"
Then how the Buggy Hate him
As the Strawhatcrew shouted out with glee
Buggy the red-nosed Pirate
You’ll go down in history. -ends singing- I hope everyone enjoy the song and probably the song I sang didn't make any sense to anyone but I enjoyed it :D
yuzukikuran476 chapter 3 . 5/2/2019
hahaha poor Coby and Helmpoo are going to get their beaten in training with garp and ... hahahaha poor Nami and man i enjoy reading this chapter and please update.
yuzukikuran476 chapter 2 . 5/2/2019
Well done with this Chapter and am surprised that Luffy never told ace and Sabo what happened to them in the future and I wonder who else would join Luffy's crew?.
yuzukikuran476 chapter 1 . 5/2/2019
Thank you for making this a one piece time travel story with Future Luffy going back to his past to warn little luffy about his future and his crew and ace and sabo fates and giving little luffy his memories and techniques as well and this time I hope that luffy gets his crew bigger and luffy training his crew about their Haki and Devil fruit power.
Helenvoid chapter 9 . 3/12/2019
You didn’t actually add anything.
You didn’t even fully upload all the chapters jeez
Althaea Amethyst chapter 1 . 1/24/2019
did you abandon this story
Robotdocter chapter 9 . 11/26/2018
its been a while, but i have really enjoyed reading this, and hope that you do update eventually if not soon. as i would love to continue reading this story! :D
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