AAAAAHH! OML! I love your story so much dude ! Please please continue to update (i hope your working on a suquel) keep up the awesome work love !

Buddy you deserve a really good reveiw but sadly this in not it but ill give it a go.

This story was so beautiful the way everything happend the relationship between the characters and how the struggled with the collars, the way the main character struggled with her life was interesting she was tough but she cared and when she had her collar turned off she cared even more, the story in general was really good it all worked so basicly keep up whatever you do, also if the end is really the end i like it, its kind of a happy cliffhanger ending good work.

Maybe you slice the chapters into, I don't know, chapters? Oh, and a sequel would be appreciated.