Such a great story! LOVED reading what was written of this! Love the idea of Luke and Lorelai having twins! Glad Lorelai's giving herself time with her relationship with Luke.

Please continue with this story x

I'm hoping you continued this story because it feels unfinished.

Wow. I'm love my this so far. I like the L/L dream coming true with the twins. I like J/R dynamic so far. However, I'm not sure I like that she seems to be putting all the blame on Jess for the past. Lord knows Jess was an jerk and not reliable but Rory wasn't the best either. She never put Jess first and always compared him to Dean. Not the best thing to do

I love this and can't wait to see what happens next.

Two great couples here. Hopefully - and quickly! - Rory will feel able to trust Jess and they can begin their relationship on stronger ground. So very happy that Luke and Lorelai are back together - and they are genuinely happy and in love with each other. Thanks for the update. More soon please.

Great chapter again. Really enjoy reading this.

A really good build up. Update soon,please!

Tell me there's more

I love the compromise. I love that Jess and Rory are excited. I can't wait to see what is going on with Jess and Rory.

Yes I love it, update soon

Awww everyone is happy. Love this chapter. More please soon.

Everyone is happy, and COMPROMISE is a good thing. More soon please.

You wrote that the DVD of the twins was "filmed abroad", yet it was a 16 hour drive from Stars Hollow? Okay, that could be Canada, but then why was everyone at the doctor's office talking about Thanksgiving and why was Lorelai lucky to find a pharmacy open? BTW, most pharmacies are open on Thanksgiving in the states.

I'm enjoying the story and you're good at writing dialogue, but the many plot holes and errors are pretty annoying. I've dismissed most, but some (like the timeline problems) are hard to ignore.

The ultimatum was in May, but Lorelai is 14 weeks pregnant in November?