Reviews for Making a Deal With a Devil
Sir Anger chapter 3 . 6/30
Why are you making Harry like this? Stuttering all over the place complaining and whining and overall making him a clumsy wimp
Sir Anger chapter 2 . 6/30
Why is Harry acting like a pre pubescent child shouting at everything and stuttering like a little girl?
wishitweretrue24 chapter 10 . 6/24
If Voldemort summons a devil and that devil happens to be Riser, I can not imagine a more egotistical team up. Holy shit, two evil megalomaniacal assholes constantly referring to themselves in the third person. Peak of comedy watching those two piss over themselves trying to insist that they each are superior. They might very well kill each other off lol. I really hope this story gets an update.
Dirt Rider 712 chapter 10 . 6/18
This is amazing, and seems about to get even better! Please give us more!

Dirt Rider
Chaos Snow Kitsune chapter 1 . 5/27
I remember finding this fic awhile ago and liking it. However my first thoughts on finding it again is that I wanna see a Harry/Tonks fic from you. That one line about Harry having a crush on her makes me want it so bad!

Though I'm not even sure if you are writing anymore
my dick is hard chapter 10 . 5/21
MY DICK IS SUPER HARD!
Eternalking500 chapter 10 . 5/16
This is a awesome story, i hope you update again soon, it would be a shame to discountine or abandon the story.
Trump chapter 10 . 5/7
IM SO HARD RIGHT NOW
Trump chapter 5 . 5/6
HARRY POTTER STILL RAPED ME
my dick is hard chapter 10 . 5/6
MY DICK IS SO HARD
Bigvanilla chapter 10 . 5/4
Great story hope there's more I really love it
Fullmetal11791 chapter 6 . 5/2
Didn't really like Harry's conversation with Hermione halfway through the chapter. Especially didnt like how the author perspective made it seem like Hermione fucked up for being worried and asking him about Rias, when its clear Harry was being a bit of a douche.

That could have been handled better. He should have understood where she was coming from and empathized with her being worried about him. After all, he *is* constantly attracting danger and his backstory for Rias *is* suspicious. He could have just discussed it with her, he didn't even have to tell the whole truth. Just smile, "thanks for the concern, i can see why you'd be worried and i appreciate it, but I trust her. She helped save me from V, Dumbledore knows of her family, and she makes me happy. Think you guys will be great friends. Now, lets go get breakfast."

Easy peasy, no need for random OOC acts designed to cause angst.
Fullmetal11791 chapter 4 . 5/2
Like the chapter, but why would the wand simply fly to Harry? The wand changes ownership if its won in a duel or fight, yet it just flew to him. I'm sure Dumbledore would have given it to him anyway but this just felt off.
Fullmetal11791 chapter 2 . 5/2
A story where Dumbledore seems to be treating Harry as an adult, isn't attempting to meddle or manipulate people, and isn't getting bashed?

Color me intrigued.
glowdust3 chapter 10 . 4/28
I wasn't sure how I liked this story at first but it just keeps getting better as more details are added about the characters, world, and magical system. Are there going to be more chapters?
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