| Reviews for We Tumble to the Ground and Then You Say |
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Gretchen Amy chapter 1 . 10/9/2019 I want to know exactly what the Ewoks said! |
Lcmbovie11 chapter 1 . 10/3/2019 This is a great re-read! |
Guest chapter 1 . 4/22/2018 Ah, my heart: Han feeling wanted and loved and strong... Just lovely. And brilliant how you had Han telling us how turned on Leia was: her breathing, blushing, and body temperature. Very original! |
Ree923 chapter 1 . 12/30/2017 all of your stories are brilliant. |
argellastarkiller chapter 1 . 10/9/2017 i always come back to this story. fantastic. |
mary-twig chapter 1 . 6/17/2017 What a great smutty romance/romantic smut! :))) I love that this story is full of sexy and playful dialogue, and also as always - the description of, actually, EVERYTHING (!) is on point! Leia's happiness is radiating from her! It's so good that she and Han finally found their little spot on Endor's moon. I feel sorry for them that they'll soon be caught after their intimate encounter... :P I love how you describe their relationship through their dialogue. Teasing is so good there! Leia's "Who says I'm impressed?" is my favorite, I think. :D Then the way you write their closeness, their feelings, their vulnerability These two are so in love witch each other and you definitely have a gift to show us some tender and intimate part of their relationship. Btw I adore that they are having sex outdoors, and I love Leia's condifence there! A real ball of fire lol. ;P Also her confession that she wanted to do this for so long, and how Han teases her about it! So funny and sexy! :P But also beautiful, as she's not so scared of saying such things to him any more. You can notice her full trust there, it's amazing. And then the main part of the smut - love, love, love. You know, I have read some of such stories, but for sure you're my favorite ones when it comes to this kind of things. :D How plausibly you write about their devotion to each other through such gestures is splendid. As the main role of this play their emotions, this act is not just a pleasant one from the physical side, but the emotional side is even much better here. The fact that you used Alderaani phrase makes this work brilliant. Good job! The part when Ewoks come in? ;D Lol, I love it! I laughed so hard at this part, especially when they said: *Pin-chess eki Solo reh rehluu nuv-nuv*. This "nuv-nuv" is so hilarious to me! :D I'm imagining those little bear-likes to say such thing and I'm collapsing with laughter! :P And btw, "pin-chess" sounds cute, haha. :D Falcon as a home for Leia. Do I have to add more? :) Wonderful story! Thank you for writing it! |
MrsScruffyNerfherder chapter 1 . 3/18/2017 Yummy and adorable. Go, naughty Leia! I *LOVE* that Han learned that Alderaani phrase from 3PO, and his counter about how to say the same thing in Corellian. "home" - makes me happy |
Guest chapter 1 . 10/16/2016 Great little story. Perfect combination of romance, humor, passion and tenderness. |
CorellianAngel chapter 1 . 9/20/2016 Okay I can't remember if I might have review this under justinegrahams or elsewhere but what the heck. Can I say I really love the way you write romantic smut? It's never seriously sexy. It's always fun, funny, AND sexy. I have a hard time deciding which are my faves. (All?) before this. Yup. I think you ladies get better each time you write. I was hooting with laughter about the ewoks and then you punctuate the scene with the spear insinuation. LOL. Once I stop gasping with laughter. I'm going to reread this again . And again... |
Guest chapter 1 . 9/15/2016 Of course Leia's been dreaming about this since Sericci. So have I..! |
Guest chapter 1 . 9/10/2016 Ohshit ohshit ohshit: Leia desperate to get her clothes back on! That was so funny! |
Ravens23Princess chapter 1 . 9/8/2016 Love love love it. ) Great job! |
JCBS chapter 1 . 9/6/2016 You two have the sexy hilarity down pat. "I've been tryin' to impress you for years, Princess. ... Guess I finally figured out how." Lol! Then the next thing I know I'm *swooning* bc Han is speaking to Leia in Alderaani... I'm pretty sure I've said this before, but your Han is just so dreamy. 3 |
Cicatrick chapter 1 . 9/6/2016 This is so gorgeous. The way you two have rendered the piece- particularly, for me, Leia supine with her arms bracketing her head, and Han's stricken response- is simply artistic perfection, but without the sterility that often comes with that concept. It's so rich, loving, shot through with all of the joyful, humorous, vigorous, tender, erotic emotion you'd expect from young lovers who've just found themselves alive and free and together at the end of war. |
Dannii98 chapter 1 . 9/6/2016 Always love your stories and especially this one! I can't wait to see what else you have planned. |