Again well done ! :D a very well written story :D i have a feeling that you must be into the lifestyle ? U have a keen eye for it and its nice to see it writtern well :D cant wait to read the seond one ... i kinda went around in a vircle read ur third first then 1st haha :)

How is this already the end? More!
Haru seems a little OoC though... he speaks so much.

Oh gosh this entire story is everything! I love the story line, the dialogue is so in character and l the terminology reduced me to a pile of jello! I've been looking for stories like this as inspiration for one of my upcoming pieces and this was oozing with ideas! Great job!

Guh! *melty puddle of nose bleeding fangirl*

I really enjoyed this! I liked how you had it from Harus and Makato's perspectives. it wasn't just shut there was a good storyline and character dialogue. BTW could absolutely see Haru having a freaky side to him. All in all you did a great job!